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Post by neelam on Mon Aug 31, 2009 12:07 am

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Please post only the written updates for kis desh thanks.
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Re: Kis desh written updates here.

Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:47 pm

17th APRIL 08 (Thursday)

the epi begins with Ash getting ready she cannot match her sandals
so she calls daljeet to get her old rack of shoes..daljeet makes a
face..but then says tht if she doesnt do it then she'll b in
trouble..she sends meher with the old rack of shoes.seeing her ash
thinks tht her mom is smart she send meherwith the shoes..seh tells
meher to keep the rack down..she tells meher to clean the dust off her
sandels..meher is crying..then she tells her to make her wear the
sandals...meher does so...

heer is going for work ash stops her and tells her tht she will drop
her as she and prem r going out for dinner..but heer refuses...ash thn
asks her abt her work place heer says skyhigh hotel..ash thinks tht
hotel is of prem and she would never let prem know tht her relatives
work in his hotel..she tells heer to leave for work as she shldnt get
late to work on the first day..heer leaves..

prem preet and harman r waiting for ash..preet thnx ash for coming so
early ash gets mad and preet says tht in the time she got ready harman
would have comlpleted a business deal from US and returned..they all
sit in the car..ash apologises to prem by saying tht she was talking to
someone..prem says tht there is no one at home whom she was
talking..ash says she was talking to her relative down market
people...she further says tht even tough she is from ludhiana her
lifestyle is western..preet on the music ash gets mad at him he says u
can continue talking to prem..harman says he shldnt have done so..but
preet says she is non stop..prem doesnt even like her voice..god knows
how they'll get married..even if they did it wont work but
yamraj(lalit) will make it happen by hook or by crook poor prem..harman
says he doesnt believe preet is saying tht as she is good frnd of
his...preet says tht's the reason m saying as she is my gud frnd prem
would never like her..he further says tht in lub her name is lovely ash
on fire and he has a name for their(ash-prem) relationship too backfire

they reach the hotel pret and harman says tht ash and prem should have
the dinner alone as they dont wanna b kabab mein haddi..but ash refuses
by saying tht prem will only openhis mouth to eat she suggets tht they
shld go to disco..this way prem will get to meet her frnds as
well..harman refuses but preet insisits they all go to the disco...ash
says her frnd sammer is the only one in ludhiana who organizes such
huge parties..sammer is having a drink ash calls him..ash-prem go to
meet him..ash introduces him to prem and sameer says tht if he needs
nething thn he shld contact him..thn ash goes to the dance wid her
frnds and prem is alone..he orders a drink and thn looks at ash smiles
thn looks at his ring and remmbers the night he saw heer's face and she
put the ring in his finger..ash notices prem goes to him and asks him
to dance but he refuses..

heer is in waiter's uniform(western) doing some work..she stops a lady
from goign in the restricted area but the lady doesnt listen and goes
heer wonders who was she jsut then two drunk boys(i think one is
sameer) come and see heer doing work..he tells her to bring some towels
to his room, heer agrees..

harman tells prem tht he shld take the hotel's responsibilty but prem
refuses and asks him to focus on hs studies and enjoy the party he says
he will b back as he has to sign some papers..there heer brings towels
to room she is arranging them and the boy tries to force her..heer
shouts to stop it..the boy tells her to keep quiet..heer says she'll
complain to the manager ..the boy pushes her on the bed..heer make
efforts to keep him away..and final escapes from the room ..she runs
and slips on the floor..the boy(sameer) chases her..and he falls too
and gets hurt he calls the manager and says tht he will shut down his
hotel and blames heer for spoiling his clothes, getting him hurt and
misbehaving wid him..heer refuses but sameer(the boy) tells the
managert tht if heer is there for one moment too thn he will close down
the hotel..the manager says tht he will take permission from the boss
and throw her out..the manager leaves and sameer tells heer tht he will
destroy her..

lalit is walking then all of sudden he starts breathing heavily(i think
he is getting asthama attack)..he shouts for gayatri and prem..he takes
his pump and tries to inhale it but its not working..he tries to call
but falls on the floor..THE END!

Precap: Manager telling prem tht the girl he said to hire nisbehaved
with the customer..prem tells tht give her salary of one month and ask
her to leave..manager tells her to get out heer says tht dont to this
but the manager doesnt listen and tells sameer tht our new boss prem
apolozises for this and heer hears this and says Prem!

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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:48 pm

21st APRIL 08 (Monday) Lalit is shouting gayatri, prem but no one comes he take the phone
but than he falls down. Meher sees this and is running towards him. She
crys and says lalit uncle what is happening with you get up chahu. She
says what should i do no one is at home. She sees the phones and call
prem but prems phone is with ashelsha. She says prem come fast home
lalit uncles isnt good but ashles cut the phone. Ashlesha says how dare
she to call prem and kya bakwaas bol rahi thi. She sees that lalit
uncle havent medicines any more and run.

At prems office the manager comes and tells him about what happened.
And says that the girl dont apologize to them but fight with them. Prem
says give her the salary of 1 mont and say to her to leave the job.

Manager comes back and say get out of here to Heer. Heer says please
dont do this, dont fire me. The manager says dont waste my time this
are boss order. Go away from heer or should i call the watchman. She
walks away and the manager say to the sameer my new boss says sorry to
you because of the behaviour of this girl. Heer hears this and wipes
her tears.

Heer in her normal clothes says job is gone what should i do know and
the zameen and mehers study. She walks...when she is outside prem opens
his window he has a file in his hand and all the papers blow away. Heer
picks the papers. Prem sees her and heer sees prem. The papers fell
down from her hand she walks away and prem comes to her adn says roko
but she dont stop and he runs to her. He say stop i have to talk to you
. Heer says kya baat karenge aap. that you did a good thing because you
hired me and that you are the boss of this hotel and me a servant. Mr.
prem juneja you aer the boss of this hotel you can hire people us
insaan ki ghalati ho ya na hoon. Kitni mushkil se mujhe yeh job
milgayie adn you you tooked it away from me with out i did a wrong
thing. Oh yah i did a wrong think meine ap ne izaat bachana chahata.
Maybe your staff members fulfill najaes khwahishe of you customers but
i wont do it. She says i cant live with out my izaat. He says why is
there so much pain in your eyes you are that girl i saw in shiv mandir.
You runned away from there and after that you came in my room jo bhi
hoon you dont haev to think anymore. If i gave you pain than i will
take it away too. He says i heard something different about you i fired
you with out i knewed the truth i should not have done that. He hold
her hand(such a sweet scene)and they look at each others eyes. Prem
says chalo mere saath and takes her with him. They go to the room of
Sameer. He walks towards them he says i am Prem juneja boss of this
hotel do you know this girl. he says ya because of this girl mujhe
choth ahi thi but i haev forgiven her. Prem say she dont has forgiven
you. Prem says to Heer hit him i am your boss i am saying hit him just
slap him adn Heer slaps him.

Meher is at a chemist's shop she calls prem again but ashlesha cut it
again but Meher calls again but she cuts again she takes the medicines .

She is back home and then Daljeet comes and say apne ankeh kolyeh adn
says to Meher kya kya tune did u put poisin in his food. She says to
Meher get lost of her.

Prem says to Sameer get lost of i dont have place for your sort of
people. Manager comes adn say please sir come fast there is phone from
your home they said it is urgent and he goes. Just when Heer goes away
Aslesha comes adn asks what happened. He tells her what happened adn
say mein apne be izati ki badla longa . Ashlesha says please forget it
he is my fiance he say noo. Sameer says come on Bobby lets go. They
show a whole gang of sameer they want to open a door but then the next
heroo Preet comes adn hold sameers hand adn Harman is ther too
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:49 pm

22nd APRIL 08 (Tuesday)

sameer and his friends are headed towards prems office. sameer goes
to open it but preet coems and stops him. preet in full pujabi jat mode
tells sameer to get lost and says that b4 he even reaches prem he will
break his legs. he tells him that sameer may be some governors son
..."par mein kisse ke baap se nahi darta" and tells him to leave from.
both he and harman join hands and stand in front of the door...seeing
this sameer leaves. prem is inside talking on the phone and we see him
droppin the phone.
lalit opens his eyes and sees harman, prem and preet by his side. he
says that nothing will happen to him till prem gets married and harman
becomes a lwyer. he doesnt say anything to preet and he feels bad.
lalit tells them life is really short and prem tell himtnot to say
something like this again. prem looks at DJ and asks her why she never
called him to tell him about lalit. meher comes there and tells prem
that she called him numerous times. prem realizes that he left his cell
with ash and asks her for it. ash is quiet and scared and thinks that
today prem will delte her from his life. prem looks at his phone and
says that there are no missed calls on it. DJ tells ash thats she saw
the missed calls and deleted them all. DJ then calls maher a lier and
says that it was her who called prem while meher did nothing. prem says
that there muct be no netwrok in the hotel and leaves. DJ continues to
call meher a lier but lalit stops her.meher leaves crying
lalit tells harman that his dad wanted him to beocme a lawyer and he
cud not but he wants harman to beocme a lawyer and both share a
fatehr-son talk. outside prem comes to preet who complains that mom
loves prem and dad loves harman and nbody loves him (oh my poor
baby..come here and let me give u a hug ) prem tells him that he loves
him...preet says that he can solve this marrying one of ash's friends
and she can give him all the love and both the bros hug
meher tells heer that she did not lie and just DJ comes there and says
that she lied for mehers sake cuz that NRI buddha wud have given her
money for saving his life and she did not want them to get insulted.
she instigates them even more by saying that lalit cares a lot about
his money
prem is in the office and starts dreming. the song (pehli pehli bat
balye) plays and he sees heer everyehere. he sees her bringing tea for
him and behind his bookshelf. just then his manger comes and ruins the
dream sequence.
here manmeets parents are getitng ready to leave with shagun when they
hear some noise behind their room door and are worried that the
neighbrs will complain soon. they reach heers place with shagun and
give it to heer. manmeets mom then demands the land, clothes, jewelry
and a big wedding.lalit watches this from upstairs. DJ takes her to a
corner and tells her that the only reason the weddin gis happening is
cuz heers parents are dead otherwise their son wud remain single his
entire life. she tells her to get the kids married quietly and take
heer while they (DJ) gets the land.
precap: manmeets parenst are tired of hearing the complaints from the
neighbors about the door. when somebody knocks the door and they think
its one of the neighbors complaining again....it turns out to be lalit.
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:49 pm

23rd APRIL 08 (Wednesday)

Manmeets parents are yelling at the neighbors for intruding on their
privacy. She tells them all leave. They leave and just then someone
knocks the door. They think it’s the neighbors again but are shocked to
see lalit. He tells them heers is just like his daughter and that’s why
he brought shagun for the boy. He comes in and they offer him tea. He
says that he wants to see manmeet and aks is he is home and they say
that he is. Just then he hears some noise form behind the door. He goes
inside the room. Its all dark. He then sees a photo of a girl on the
wall and asks if manmeet painted that. They hear noises from the
basement but his parents say that the noises are coming from outside
and change the topic. While leaving the room lalit accidentally moves
the carpet a little on the floor and man’s mom immediately covers it.
After lalit leaves man’s mom wonders how come he didn’t see anybody.
Just then a girl comes from behind the curtain and says that she hid
the raaz under the rug (that lalit had moved)

Ash is moving around worrying that she is stuck with devdas and wonders
if she is paro or chandramikhi( u my dear are chunnilal). Just then
preeto dear comes there and asks why she is so worried. Ash tell him
that his boring bro doesn’t even look at her and she wants prem to
become a rock star like preeto. She tells him that she has an idea that
she wants to arrange a costume ball and wear micro minis. Preeto tells
her that prem will completely stop looking at her and asks her to dress
up in salwars and sarees. Ash obviously hates that idea and suggests
that she will wear indo-western outfits and preeto remarks that this
way she will neither here nor there. She vows to change prem

Here dj and joru ka ghulam are pacing nervously worried that lalit will
find something in manmeets house. Dj remarks that NRI Buddha is too
close to heer and meher. She then looks up and sees lalit standing
there. He hasn’t heard anything but aks them if manmeet is OK for heer.
He tells them that he knows a lot of ppl and can get good boys for heer
(one of them is sitting in ur own house) dj says that heers parents
decided on the boy and they have to respect their wishes. They ask if
he found anything weird in the house and lalit denies and leaves from
there. Balwant tells dj that there is a big raaz in that house and its
good that lalit didn’t find anything

Lalit comes to the kitchen and gets an idea. He sees meher and asks her
to look for gayatri and tell him when she see her coming. He then goes
in the kitchen and sees rasmalai in the fridge and begins to eat it
when gayatri comes from the other side and catches him. He lies that he
was drinking water and gayatri aks what he is doing with a katori
(bowl). she goes and aks meher what he was doing and threatens to slap
her. Meher tells her everything and starts crying., lalit tries to put
the blame on meher by saying that he got the rasmalai for her. Gayatri
tells meher that she needs to keep an eye on lalit and she will give
the double mithai for that and meher agrees (the scene is cute but I
want to know why lalit and gayarti didn’t wonder that meher is calling
them chacha and chachi)Lalit says that he has no one in the world
except for prem and calls out to him

Prem is in the office and telling his staff to be careful since they
are having a wedding in the hotel. The wedding is going on and some
lady tells heer to to give the bride who is in her room some lemon
juice since today is her fast (who fasts on their wedding day???).
while leaving heer bumps into the same woman she had met on her first
day or work and wonders why that lady is again coming out of the
restriction ares. She then reaches the brides room and sees that the
bride is leaving. The girl tells heer that she has to go see her bf one
last time and convinces heer to sit in her place as a bride. She
dresses up heer and leaves. Just then the lady (who asked heer to give
the juice) comes there and tells the bride to come down as the function
is starting
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24th APRIL 08 (Thursday)

the epi begins with pammi's mom and her friends knocking on the door
and tell her to open the door..heer is tensed she opens the door with a
ghoonghat on..they come in and pammi's mom says tht she knows pammi is
tensed for she was also nervous during her wedding...she further says
to forget the past and move on..jodis are made in heaven..they take
heer downstairs...

Ash is in the kitchen touching potatoes and beans and making faces just
then daljeet comes and says she has to make samosa(indian snack)
today..ash refuses by saying tht its impossible for her to
make..daljeet says tht she just have to pretend tht she made it in
actual dj will make meher make the samosa..ash tells her to call meher
for she cant stand those things..dj says tht she just ahve to apply
flour on her hands and show tht she made them..all she has to do is
impress the oldies(lallu and gayatri)..once she get married she will
live a life where there will b servants to do all her work..ash says
and preet will b hers as well dj corrects her tht prem and not preet to
which ash says tht she didnt complete she meant prem and preet too as a
friend...dj says thank god heer got a job or else they would b servants
to her(thts wh tu will be in future)...
Gayatri is serving aarti to all one by one first lallu then preet and
thn meher...lallu and preet are playing chess and lallu comments tht
someone remove this rani from here so tht the king can move to which
preet says tht is he talking to mom..lallu gets angry at preet and
tells her gayatri its nothing like tht he is playing chess...dj comes
and tells meher to help ash in the kitchen but gayatri refuses tht she
made meher sit with lallu to keep an eye on him and tells dj to handle
the kitchen herself..dj agrees and swears in her mind...

there the groom and bride are brought together and pammis mom opens the
ghoonghat and is shocked to see heer.. someone holds heer's hand and
grabs her and takes her to a room..dj goes to ash and tells tht she'll
have to make samosa.(serves u right)..ash is about to cry..dj says like
this she'll learn to make a dish too..ash tells her to help but dj says
tht in few days is ash mehndi and she has manicured her nails if she
helps..her thn her nails will b spoiled..ash says its her mehndi to
which dj says tht all will look at her..she leaves ash to make samosa
and ash makes a face...
the person who hold heer's hand is Prem..he pushes her side of the
pillar and stares at her (o re piya in the background)..heer says its
not her fault..tht girl..prem puts his hand on her lips..he leaves whn
they hear people shouting to open the door(o re piya in
background)..outside people are saying tht they wont leave the
girl..prem and heer come out and the bride's father says tht he wont
leave her to which prem says tht she doesnt know nething and it was not
her fault he tells its the last time he is saying tht its not her
fault..he takes red duppatta of heer and gives it pammi's mom..the
bride enters and says tht prem is right..its all her fault..she doesnt
want to marry the guy they have selected..she loves somebody else and
she has made a mistake of loving such a guy who deosnt belong in their
world but still she wants to marry tht guy and go into his world..she
cant live without him and cannot marry aayan..aayan says tht she is
right..she has shown courage and it will save three lives it not heer
nor pammi's fault..everyone has their right to love..pammi thanks aayan
for understanding her..everyone leaves pammi says sorry to prem for
everything..prem looks at heer(still holding hands) ash comes and sees
them and thinks tht before prem comes to knw the truth she should take
away prem..she comes hugs him..and take him wid her...

heer is walking on the road thinking tht whtever happend in the hotel
shouldnt have happend or it should have happened she doesnt understand
whts happening to her(hun u r in love)...she says jiske haatho mein
meri kismat thi aaj usiko ksimat ke haatho kiya...
just then a car comes and stops in front of her heer recognises him to
b manmeet..but he fails to recognize her and says why was she thinking
walking in the middle of the road..heer is staring at him..he leaves
and heer thinks why didnt he recognize her
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:50 pm

30th APRIL 08 (Wednesday)

Dj comes of the room and starts talking to herself. She says that
this NRI couple will not let her live and wonder who mitu behenji is
and who can she ask. Then she sees bebe doing pooja and goes to her.
She goes to bebe and aks if she has seen lalit and prem since they were
kids and wants to see their photos. Bebe brings an album but inthere
prem is 4-5 years old so dj aks for more photos. Bebe gets 2 albums but
gives dj only one and keeps the other one away. Dj wants to see that
album but bebe avoids that and suddenly remembers that she made halwa
for preet and goes to check on it. After she leaves dj takes that other
album and looks thru it. She sees some photo and figures out the “raaz”
and takes that photo out.(I wonder what is the big deal about prem
having another mom)

Dj comes to lalit who is putting medicine in his eyes cuz of preets
chicken towel. He says that his eyes are burining and dj says to
herself that he burn all he wants but after getting prem married to
ash. Dj tells him that she wants to give the kids a surprise and asks
for his help. She narrates the pan to him in mute and they both get
excited.

Prem goes to see heer but doesn’t know what to say. He says several
ways to tell heet hat he likes her and then finally decides on a simple
:I love”. He wonders how preet can tell everyone “I love you” without
loving them and says that he can even ask him cuz hes not home. He
finally knocks on the door but meher opens and tells him that heer has
gone for night duty (does prem even know her name??)

Here ashpreet and manmeets dad are waiting for the doc to come. She is
worried about her won raaz that is in chains. The doc comes and they go
in the room. He says that today the guys is calm so it will easier to
give him injection. He goes to him (we don’t see his face throughout)
but the guy attacks the doc with a dagger. They all restrain him and
the doc finally injects him. Man’s dad goes ashpreet and asks where he
got the dagger and she says that she was cutting fruit earlier and
acidently left it there (who cuts fruits with a dagger???)

Lalit is getting ready and gaya comes there with some sweet. She aks
him where they are going and he says that it’s a surprise. He offers to
hold the sweet for her but she refuses and asks him if he thought about
what she said. He misunderstand and thinks that she talking about him
eating sweets and says that he is always thinking about that and always
does what she says. He then tells her to get reasy and she leaves

Our devdas is comes to the hotel and is talking to somebody when he
sees heer go into a room. He follows her and holds somebode but it
turns out to be someone else. He tne goes and holds someone else and it
turns out to be someone else. It happens again for the third time and
he gets sad (maybe he shud aks heer to wear a diff color uniform so it
is easier to recognize her). He finally spots her and goes after her.
He gets in his holding hands mode and holds her hand and pulls her
behind a curtain. He tells her that he wants to tell her something now
otherwise he will never be able to tell her again. He says that he
doesn’t care about anyone coming there and that he has always been
faithful in all his relations and wants to know somehint from her
honestly. He says that he doesn’t know what is happening to him and is
about to say something when some autny comes there and calls him. He
get distracted and tells the aunty that he will there in 2 mins but
heer manages to leave in the meantime…he follows her and goes behind.
She puts her tray down and goes to talk to the manager. Prem comes and
writes a note for her on a tissue and leaves it on her tray. But heer
leaves with the manager and some other girl comes and takes the tray
.prem gets worried since he ahs written his name on that tissue. she
goes dj and gives her a drink and the tissue. Dj reads and prem sees
her and gets worried

Precap: prem and heer are as usual holding hands and lait makes the
announcement of heers weeding to manmeet to premeer’s surprise
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1st MAY 08 (Thursday)

~The epi begins with prem seeing daljeet get the
letter daljeet wonders who would give her a letter, she reads the
letter it says come and meet me in corridor..daljeet says in this age
too people write me...ofcorse why wont they I am the only one who is
bold and beautifulhttp://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley37.gif...

~Harman tells lallu(lalit)tht he was waiting for
some businessman , to which lallu says why is he doing business as he
is studying law..he goes from there saying he will wait in the corridor
and preet tells lalu dont worry he wont do business..lallu tells him to
do some work..and take care of the guests..

~In the corrdor dj comes and sees harman and ask him in this age harmanhttp://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley37.gif
..to which he says yes in this age if you have the heart thn you should
do whtever your heart says..dj is shocked..he says tht thought are more
important than age and one can do nothing about the thoughts..she says
she knows tht she looks younger but tht doesnt mean..he doesnt think
abt his age but he shld have thght abt her age..harman says ur age..he
says just thn dj sees manmeet and tells him to wait..he says he will
and thn thinks why was chachi(dj) talking like this

~she goes to manmeet and is shocked to see his
eyes and tells him wht happened to his eyes..thn manmeet puts lenses in
his eyes and dj says thank god..noone saw him without his lenses..she
thn goes to heer and tells her to change...

~Prem is looking for heer..he sees her dressed
up in red and green dress..he walks towards her(o re piya in
background)..she walks away and he goes behind her and grabs her hand
says tht today he will say wht he wants to..he wont let go this
chance..just then lallit announces heers engagement wid
manmeet..manmeet tells llallu tht he wanted to him always and heer wrks
in his hotel but he has given her the status of his daughter,lallu
tells him to go and get heer..

~Heer and Prem stare at each other..manmeet
comes and grabs heer..prem still staring at her and looking at prem
while walking with manmeet(hum mile na mile in background)

~Ash is staring at preet, dj notices this and
tells ash to look at prem but she stares at preet and says how cute he
looks today..lallu announces prem-ash engagement and gayatri gets
shocked and unhappyhttp://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley6.gif..heer looks at prem dj sends ash to prem and ash grabs prem and they stand beside lallu..

~Lallu tells heer tht he and dj wanted to give
her is surprise...gayatri si sad..than lallu says tonite's first dance
this couple will danc ewith their respective soulmates...

~All four of them start dancing on hum dilde
chuke sanam..prem is looking at heer while dancing with ash..heer doing
the same..everyting comes to stand still and heer-prem's souls walk

~In the dream-Prem and heer are alone..and there
are lights in the backgroudn..heer grabs prems's hand and puts on her
cheeks..prem puts his hand on her face..she closes her eyes..she starts
to leave and prem grabs her hand(hum dil de chuke sanam in background)
he puts his head on her shoulders and they both close their eyes...thn
they dance..dream ends..heer and prem look at each other the dance ends

~Some one tells lalit tht he made two jodis
lalit laughs..gayatri comes and tells she wants to talk to him..lalit
says tht why does she wanna talk now..gayatri says tht prem is not
happy and she told him this morning to which lalit says tht he wasnt in
the bathroom and theres is no point in talking abt it as this was fixed
as per prem's wish today he is gonna fulfill his best frnds wish and
she is saying just then balwant comes and tells to come in the hall, in
the hall dj takes off ash's engagement ring and tells tht she breaks
the engagement

Precap: Lallit questions dj tht watever she
wants to say she'll have to say in front of everyone..as she questioned
in front of everyone
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5th MAY 08 (Monday)

Daljeet says mein yeh sagai tor thi hu. Balwant
says what are you doing go and say sorry to lalit. You are joking .DJ
says i am not joking i break this engagment. Lalit shouts why DJ say
dont ask I cant say it i just break the engagement. DJ want to leave
when lalit shouts bat pori kar ke jao. DJ says please mein sabke samne
tamahasa nahi kar na chati hoon. He says tamasha ho choka he and i dont
want that people talk about my family jo bolna he sab ke samne bolo.
Why do you break the engagement. What is the reason. DJ says wajah and
say this photo and show him a picture of Lalit and his first wife and
after that she shows him a lettre. Parchaeji ke kamre se mela. Lalit
take the pictures from her hand and walks towards gayatri. He say
gayatri yeh sab, sab ke samne kya matlab hai yeh how did they came out
he is crying adn gayatri too. Gayatri says i dont know. Lalit says:
Meine yeh photo ko ad\nd yeh khat ko dafan kar chokata. Balwant say kon
sa ghat hai yeh. He reads the lettre. Lalit ji ap ke ghar mein mera
rishta gaya hai mom and dad wants me to watch your home and meet your
daughter gulraj and your son prem but when i come to you rhome refuse
for the realation because i dont want to became a wife from some one
who had 2 children adn i dont want to became your wife ho is searching
for a mom for his children Gayatri. DJ comes and say mujhe maaf kardena
parchahiji but after reading this lettre i know you are not Prems mom.
Gulraj and prem see you as their mother but you dont see them as your
children. I am a mother too I dont know of prem will get his right in
that home or not and uski biwi ko door ki baat hain. But yes prem do
all the busniss and all maybe you want a bahu that is in your control.
You think you cant control my daughter thats why you wanted to break
this realation dont get me wrong i can understand your pain. Balwant
say stop it but DJ say noo gayatri has married Lalitji because of her
parents but yeah sautela to sautela hoti hai and says another things
too. Gayatri is crying, DJ says again dont get me wronghttp://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley5.gif

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and what are you saying all the time. Preet says to Lalit houts her
down if someone says something about our family adn you aer listening
the whole time and mom what is this lettre ap prem baya ko apne beta
nahi manti hai. DJ says beta adn Preet shouts at her and says dont you
dar to call me beta. Preet says mom why arent you saying anything say
to her to shout up. I know you married to dad after meetu mom dies but
you dont see prem as your son why is no one saying something.

And then he sees prem and say Prem bhaya he is
standing far the song from taare zameen par plays he is walking towards
gayatri and just watch her adn then walks away http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley19.gif

Daljeet says i thought that i will get
musunderstanding and distance between these oldies but it backfired adn
where is prem. DJ says to lalit i didnt want tamasha.Preet comes and
say no one knows wher prem is and that is all because of in logo ke
bakwaas.

Gayatri remember when prem was young and is
sitting alone adn says i have to get prem back and goes. Lalit says
where are you going She says to prem i know where he is.

Prem sits alone and gayatri comes and say prem
listen to me do you believe them. I wrote that lettre before the
marriage. Look at me once. Prem dont like that how did you believe it
that i dont love you. Prem shouts woh lettre i dont care about that
lettre do you think mein us ghat ke liye pareshan hoon. What do you
think if someone comes and shows me a lettre and says you dindt want to
maary babuji because i and didi was in his live do you think i will
believe that. Gayatri says i never thought about it woh gath Prem says
woh gath gath gath I am not angry at the lettre but at you mom. Prem
sayw hat am i She say tu to mera beta hai. Prem says to phir kyun sab
ke samne nahi bhola. What is that lettre for thing even if god comes
and say you are not my mom i wont believe it. You are my mom. Meine ab
tak us mom ke shraad nahi manayahe how could i do it because my mom is
standing front of me.Meine aj tak ap ko apne maa mana hai. and you were
silent in front of so many peoples. onies sal ki chita onies sal pyaar
ko oradiya. Ab nahi kehpahi na ke mein ap ki beta hoon and your son
says that you aer my mom no one can take this right away from me.
Gayatri takes prem hands and walks.

Prem and gayatri comes back and says rokh jao.
Who said that Prem is not my son. Gayatri ask her somethin about how
old was Ashlesha when she got a sickniss. and Dj thinks and says 9 sal
10 sal ke thi. Gayatri says ashlesha tumhare khok se janam liya tha na
so why are you thinkin so much. Should i tell you when prem got
chickenbox and tells when he had got it Daljeet doesnt knwo anything
about her daughter and gayatri know everything. And says you dont haev
any answer on it but i have all the answers . I dont care how people
thinks about me if someone thinks that i want a bahu so i cant get my
osn in my hand to let them think adn i dont haev 3 children i have 5
children. and listen to this mom is not sauteli or sagi mom is mom

Kya episode thii great actinggg do watch it
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6th MAY 08 (Tuesday)

it
begins with gayatri telling dj that she will answer all her questions.
She says that mitu behen and lalit both have no idea of what prem
likes, wears eats…only she does..a mother is not the one who only gives
birth but the one who nurtures…she has not given birth to prem but she
has givenhim the land to stand on and achieve his goals. A mother is
not step or real but a mother only. Otherwise the world wud not
consider yashodha the mother of Krishna and she asks dj if she will
question that as well. (all this while prem face looks so small like a kid and everybody is shown crying inclusding harman and heer)

She
then goes to lalit and tells him that she wote that letter when she
found out that she is being married to some guy with 2 kids but when
she met kulraj and prem,,she fell in love with them. She says that
lalit has been mistaken if she thinks she liked and that’s why she
accepted the kids when it is actually the other way around. She first
became a mom and then his wife. She says that she had loved them for 19
years and it didn’t take him 19 secs to question that love. She then
goes back to dj and says that she 5 not 3 kids and as long as prem
considers her his mom, she is his mom and the day he says she is not,
she wont be his mom anymore. She doesn’t care what the world thinks
about her and her desire to get hi married to a girl of his choice.
Prem them comes and hugs her. Preet tells lalit that he always said he
cant be his son but today he says he cant be his father. He is mom’s
son and prem’s bro but not his son.they show flashbacks of gaya meeting
kulraj and prem for the first time…her getting married and accepting
the 2 kids. Nursing prems broken arm, getting him ready for prom..(harshad looked so cute with glasses and the bow tie!!!)they also showed the 2 girls for the first time and the family dancing together. Flasbakc over…

lalit
gets ashamed and tries to leave but gaya stops him… they all have
emotional moment. It then that prem announces he will marry the girl
his parents sleected and goes to hug lalit. Heer looks heartbroken ans
ash looks dissappointed. Prem leaves…dj comes to gaya and appologises
to her..she says that she was worried about her daughter and didn’t
want her to to come to theit house without gayas permission. She was
worried that ash would not be happy this and that’s why she said all
that but now she is happy that everybody is ok with the relationship
and gaya tells her that if god wants everything will be ok and leaves
as well. Dj turns around and gives her wicked grin and goes to wipe her
tears and sees the tissue again. She realizes that this message was
from prem to some girl not for her from Harman.

Gaya
follows prem and aks him what he wud do abiout his love jnow that he
has said yes to the wedding. Prem says that the giel does not belong to
him now and he is OK. prem leaves and lalit comes there. he comes and
gives his lecture of how fortunate he is to have and they both have and
emotional talk

Heer
is leaving when the manager stops her. He tells her that he knows she
is related to lalit but he wants her to check some suite cuz it belongs
to some big poilitician. Heer accepts and leaves. The manager then
calls sameer and tells him that she has sent her to his room. Heer is
taking care of everything in the room when the mamger comes there and
puts some pills in the water. He then tells heer that she has done a
good job and he wants her to check the drinking water temp as. She goes
ahead and drinks the water and goes back to work. Manager calls sameer
and gives him the go ahead sign. Here heer feels dizzy and finally
faints
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:52 pm

7th MAY 08 (Wednesday)

Prem is in his office/room and thinking about heer. Hum is pal yahan
plays in the background and he cries thinking abut heer. There heer is
all dizzy and she faints in the room



Sameer is walking towards the suite when he is confronted by preet.
Preet tells him that he wont understand without trashed. He tells him
that he beat up so much that he will forget the name of the hotel and
that a beggar can get a room there but not sameer. He calls the
security and ask them to throw him out and tell them that if they see
him again they can thrash him.



Prem is walking out when he sees the suite and enters it (I don’t know
why…maybe he felt that heer was inside) he sees heer and goes to her.
He tells her wake up and sprinkles water on her. He then picks her up
and takes her to a sofa and puts her down. He moves some hair from her
forehead and wonders whats wrongs with her.



Outside dj finds ash who bumps into her and thinks that its preet. Dj
asks her about prem and shows her the tissue and tells her that prem
has written it. Ash is surprised that prem knows how to write a love
letter and wonders who its for.



Preet is outside with balwant who introduces him to his friends and
their daughter. He tell them that preet is fabulous and NRI and all
strong with brains. The girls mom starts praising her daughter about
how the entire Ludhiana is crazy about her and all the guys want to
marry her. Preet wonders what he is doing there. Balwant says that the
lady is right and preet asks him if he likes and he can keep her



Prem cannot heer like that and decides to take her to the doc(no I
think he just wanted another reason to pick her up). He goes out and
overhears dj telling ash about prems love letter and that the girl is
in this party. Ash asks her if she wants her to tie prem to her pallu
but dj wants ash to be his tail and sneds her to find him. Prem
deicedes that they are suspecting him so he shud nto go out like this
and goes back inside.



Manmmets parents come out and manmeet is outside…they tell him why he
came out and that they need some money for the wedding. Manmmet does
his freaky actions and goes to get a check for them..he goes to give it
to them when his (girl) friend comes there and takes it and shows him
that he has signed as prashant and tells him that one mistake can cause
them everything and tears the check



Its morning and meher is waiting fro heer to come home…she is standing
on the road and preet comes there jogging. He asks rano if she is
jogging and says that she needs it. Meher says that she is wating for
heer and preet starts laughing. He says that if she stands her and
waits…it wil not make heer come faster. Just then ash comes and preet
goes to attend a call. Ash tells meher to stay away from preet as he is
HER husband and then corrects herself and say that he is her husbands
bro and hers only. Preet comes back and asks ash if meher shud jog with
them and ash goes on about how meher is downmarket and cant run in her
torn shoes whereas she has a style and proper clothes and goes on to
show how she jogs.. some dog is coming and sees her running and starts
running behind he. Preet startst laughing and tells rano to laugh as
well and it is funny and it doesn’t cost to laugh. Meher starts
laughing and preet goes after ash.



Heer wakes up and turns around and sees prem sleeping by her…she tries
to take her dupatta but prem puts his hand there and wakes up when she
pulls it…she starts freaking out nd prem tells her to trust him as he
was just concerned about her and trying to waker her up but fell
asleep. He says its his fault that he did not take her to the doc last
night. Heer is leaving when someone knocks the door. Prem goes to see
and says that its manmeet. Heer decides to tell him everything but prem
tells her that this cud break her relantion but heer does not want to
lie to him. Prem thinks manmeet will not understand but heer is adamant
so prem finally goes to open the door and MM is surprised to see him
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Post by priya_19 on Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:00 pm

8th may 2008
~Manmeet knocks on the door, prem opens the door, heer hides behind the curtain..manmeet walks in and sits on the sofa as he ahs to take prems signature, prem signs and manmmet looks at the paper meanwhile prem see tht heer is visible through the curtains he goes and adjust the curtains, manmeet leaves, heer comes out glances through the window and says tht there r so many people outside wht will they think if they see her coming out of prems room, prem tells her not to worry as he will escort her outside, they both r walking down the stairs and the women comment tht those two seem like some newly married couple, both luk ver good together, heer prem looking at each other(suraj hua madham music playing in the background)
~Harman sits on the sofa just then phone rings and its kulraj he tells her tht she should come as prem is not letting him work only study, lallu comes and asks him whose call si it , he tells kulraj didi's lallu takes the phone and complains her abt gayatri tht she doesnt let him eat and makes him starv, gayatri is listening to all this and takes away the phone, lallu scolds harman for not letting him knw tht gayatri was behind him, gayatri tells her to come to India , kulraj is shown taking care of the kids, she says she cant come and go newhere with three kids she is preparing milk for her youngest child then she sees the older one playing with the knife she tells gayatri she'll call later..goes to the kid and the kid speaks in english tht take a chil pil he is ironman, to which she says tht he is no ironman and complains tht he always speaks in english..
~Ashpreet is talking to her husband abt the marriage tht the marriage cards have come and she likes them, her husband tells her he is not worried abt tht but the groom hope everything goes well..she says it will till date no one knows and in future too no one should know...she says tht lallu brought some fine suits for him she'll show she goes in the room and shouts her husband goes there and sees tht all the marriage cards are torn..they both are shocked
~Heer is walking with towels in her hand and bumps into prem they both stare, she walks by and prem starts wakingon the opposite side both looking at each other wid suraj hua madham plying in the back ground. P rem is assigning some work to some employee, heer is with her trolley, the flower vase falls dowm and prem geos to help her, she picks up the roses he picks one too and gets hurt heer holds his hand prem too holds hers, she remembers her engagement and let go her hand..they both get up and start walking with their backs facing each other..hum mile na mile in background
~Inspector come at the hotel and tell the receptionist tht they wanna see the manager, she calls the manager and the inspector tells them they r in search for a girl and they r sure she is in this hotel, heer is walking through prems office she hears someone talking she looks through the window to see the same girl who goes in the restricted area everytime she thinks wht is she doing here, the girl is talking to a man and he tells her to hid some papers in the office as no one will suspect tht place..something falls down they both leave, heer opens the door and sees money on the floor she picks up and goes through the office to find out some construction work going on..she sees one room she opens the room and is shocked
~At home everyone is at the dining table gayatri si serving, harman tells tht he too will join the business and make this one hotel into ten hotels, lallu advises him tht one should do only one thing at time to b suceesful and gayatri agrees, lallu says the people didnt go to moon in one day, to which preet says tht he remembered something from moon and tht si tht peopel see one moon every day but we get to see two moon eveyday at the same time..lallu gets angry and tells him tht he is not his son.preet tells him to decide whether he is or not his son if he is not thn he will talk like this to him everytime lallu gets angry and they both start running preet collides into prem
~Prem thts him tht he will never change, he tells everybody tht their hotel is doing very good it will turn into 7 star soon, gayatri si very happy, prem tells her to sign some papers and she asks wht paper r they he tells her tht he is making the hotel on his name to which harman gets angry and tells him tht he wants the hotel on his name..and tells prem tht he differentiated between real and step prem tells him to stop but he says tht dj was right he showed today tht he is step..gayatri slaps harman..THE END!!!!
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12 may -08
Gaytri slaps harman and say you haev to be ashamed. Preet comes and says if prem bro asked my live today i will give it to him and you..only for a hotel. Gayatri signs the papers and says i will see who can stop me. Prem walks away Preet says please bhai boora mat mana. and follows him and he sits on his knees and says please dont go angry away. If harman said something i ask for forgiveniss. He ask please forigve it and hugs him. Prem walks away.

Heer opens a door and sees that girl with a man. They stands up and says you what are you doing here. Heer says what are you doing here if you know it is not allowed to come here. Who are you and who is this man. She says it is not of your bussniss. Heer says give the answers of my questions and how did you come to so much money and shows her the money. And at that moment the police comes with the manager. Police says soo you are heree since when are you doing this you did it first in chote chote hotel but now in star hotel. That girl says i am innocent i dont do anything wrong i am from a poor family this girl has done it to me look at her she has money in her hands. Heer says noo inspector she is lying i didnt do anything wrong. The police says gireftar karo isse. Heer says i didnt do anything wrong this girl is lying. The inspector says what ever you have to say say in the court. The inspector says to the manager i have to talk to the owner of this hotel. We have got 2 callgirls the one is doing the work and the other on karwatie hai one girl havent opened her mouth till now. but the other one has confessed everything. a a police say this girls will go to jail but is hotel ki malike is ki bi bora haal hoga. I have heard it is some prem juneja. Hawaldaar says yes he had very much money. The inspector says all the money will go they wont be able too show their faces to anyone. And that prem will go to the jail. Prem comes the inspector says you must know that beqanoni harkate tumhare hotel mein ho rahie hai and you must know if that happens in a hotel that hotel can be closed too. Prem says i dont know anything. The police says their are prostuitie ghanda tumha hotel mein ho raha hai

Prem says we dont know anything about it. Inspector says a girl from the staff has doing this soo all the owners have to go to jail. Prem says all the owners and show him papers and says i am the only owner of this hotel and if something is happening here than i am responsible. Ins says but we have heard that there are 3 owners prem says you know it but law wants prove and i will show them the prove if someone is going to jail than it is me. And then lalit comes and is shocked prem is shocked too to see him here and lalit remembers that prem asked gayatri too sign the papers for the hotel. and K3G song is playing they walk toward each other. Prem says you here. Lalit says you did such a job today that people wont call you Lalit junejas son but if they see me they will say look prem junejas father and they hug.

police star the talashi lalit ask who is that girl that becaus eof her we are in problem. Heer remembers the words of the inspector that they wont be able to show their face and prem will go to jail.

The inspector says in this papers is written that that room is unders unstruction and in that room are illegally things happening. Why did someone who has so much money this will be the headlines off all newspapers arrest him Hawaldaar says wait that girls confessed that she brought the papers to prems room. Inspector says sorry you said that you didnt know anything you must sign some papers so you has to go with us too police station Lalit says prem stay here i will go to the police station and sign them and he goes away

Prem asks who is that girl. he says see their prem sees Heer and is shocked. Prem says she cant be that girl I know here police says she confessed. Prem says do you know what are you saying say to the inspector . Insp cays yeh apni khuna qabool kiya and if you tried to save here you will go to jail too. Prem says oke if you want mujhe le chalo you have to blame someon what ever will happen will hapen with me because she didnt do anything. you got that stuff rom my room so it is mine I know here they are really masoom girls i font knwo why she is taking the blame on her self. He says take me. Heer say ek minute he is saying that he put the stuff in his cabin can he say wheer in the cabin. Prem say woo..Heer says i will tell you and says where they found it. Heer remembers her conversation with that girl. Heer says i can save you and the owner but you have to tell me where you hide that things i will take all the blame on my self. Heer says you know since when i am doing this work since i came to this hotel and from taht day i put the money in your cabin and that is why i know where the money was. You are right mr. juneja i needed money to live how could i have been happy with such a chota job and i thought about doing this what do you knwo you are NRI people you have money. But i didnt do anything wrong. Prem shouts stopit shout your mouth tum hosh mein hoo what are you saying. Heer says yes i know what i am saying. I needed money mere aur mere behen ke liye. I needed money for the dreams me and my sister had. Insp says that is enough and say now hwere that red diary is if you did this job than it must be with you. Heer says wich red diary ..the one where all the phone numbers of your clients are . Prem says see she dont know anything about the red diary. Heer remembers the red diary and heer says i know where it is it is in my locker.

Prem shouts why did you do this itna bhara dokha. They take Heer away . Prem remembers heer after she was fired and then what she said a few minutes ago. Prem follows the car of the police and Heer sees this Prem is very angry.
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Post by priya_19 on Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:03 pm

13 may-08
Lalit walks into Juneja house and Gayatri asks about Prem. He says why should you care he is not your real son we should not care about Prem as he is noone for us.He tells Gayatri that you loved him more then you own sons and see he took the hotel from Preet and Harman. He will take everything from them. Harman tells his father to be quiet and don’t talk bad about Prem bhai I know he took the hotel but I cant tolerate anything against bhai. Lalit says I wanted to see if you still lived ur brother after saying all that to him in the morning. Lalit says do you guys know why Prem aksed for the hotel because if anything bad happened to the hotel the blam will come on him. An then Lalit tells everyone about the scam(this is all muted). Harman falls to his father ‘s feet crying and says how can he think about Prem Bhai being selfish and the Lalit tells Harman that a family is not who stays together a family is who lives for each other and dies for each other.
Prem is walking in the rain(jag soona sonna in bg) he is having flashbacks of times he spent with Heer. He is on the bridge and he gets drunk and then he remembers what Heer said in the hotel. He is in the rain and cries out loud. He walks to his car and drives off and he is at home or office i couldnt tell and says out loud that there is no drawer in his cabin and he asks himelf why did Heer take the blame and he will not let her take the blame for something she did not do.
Manmeet finds out that Heer took the blame to herself and he has to free her because. And the mom tells him becus of u she is in jail and you have to free her because you know how important this marriage is. Manmeet is behind the scam.
Meher is in her room and she cries and says her Di can never do such thing. Chahci comes and grabs her hair. Chahci burns Meher’s clothes and says let your sister come back I will make you guys work so much. You both sisters will wake up 4 in the morning and wont go to sleep until everyone in this house is asleep and no more working for your sister. Chahci leaves and locks Meher inside the room and Meher cries for her sister to come back. Screen splits in half with Meher crying on one side and Heer in jail on the other side.
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Post by priya_19 on Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:04 pm

14 may-08
Manmmet and the ladya re talking and manmeet tells her to take the blame to get heer out as she is his fiancé. The girl tells manmeet that if he is worried about her then he shud take the entire blame. Afterall he gave her the money and now his poor fiance is caught in this mess.

Just then there is a knock on the door and the girl tells manmeet to hide behind the bar. She opens the door and its prem. He comes in and tells her to confess her crime. He says that he all the proof against her. She has been doing the business for 2.5 years and heer has been working there for only 2 months. He also has the records of the number of times she has been to the hotel and with which politician. He will turn her in with the names of all the polticians and they will save themselves and the police is not going to leave her. He tells her to confess her crime cuz if he tells the police about it she will spend her entire life in jail.

He leaves and manmeet comes out and tells her that now she will have to confess and she cant bring his name into the picture as she has no proof againt him.

Lullu and clan are at the table when DJ comes there and starts her “main lut gayi’ crap. Balwant and lallu asks her what happened and she tells thm about what heer did. Lallu does nto believe her but she keeps crying and tries to convince him. She sasy that heer turned out to be a cheap girl who did all this for money and now she has put prem in trouble as well. She thinks to herself that she will remove heer from the equation and make the path clear for ash (yeah u do that and then see how ash follows that path and goes staright to preeto)

Heer is sitting in the jail when she prem coming to her. She goes to the grill and holds it. Prem slowly puts his hand on hers and they stand there holding hands. “ya rabba plays in the background”. Prem asks her why she did all this. She keeps quiet and he says that the girl who came form a small town and is trying to make thing work for her and her sister, lost her parents but not her dignity, who cries in shiv mandir and tells God to give her strength to handle her pain, who hides her face in the night when she sees a stranger is telling him that she did business for money. She starts crying and he wipes her tears. Her holds her tears in his fist and leaves.

He goes out to talkto the cop and asks him about her bail. The cop tells him not to get involved in this mess and that girl will bring him down. Prem tells him that heer took all the blame to protect him and he will do everything to protect her. A person who destroys themselves for someone else has junoon and now its her junoon against his. He says that he will sned his lawyers to get her out.

He starts to leave and sees manmmet walking in. MM goes to the cop and aks him if they will leave the girl if they get the actual culprit. The and cop and prem are surpeised. MM syas that he has the girl and tells her to come. The other manager comes in with the lady who confesses her crimes. Prem comes there and says that they cannot keep heer there anymore and have to let her go. Cop says that the case has not been registered yet so they can let her go but they will need someone to come and testify for her.

They call DJ and asks her to come and she gets all excited to think that she take heer down now.DJ reaches the jail and is shocked to see prem there. She goes there to badmouth heer but prem stops her and tells her to see the cop. The cop asks her about heers character and DJ starsts off as if she will badmouth heer but starts praising her and her character. The cop is satisfied and tells someone to take heer out

Heer comes out and prem is happy to see her. She walks towards him and sees MM standing behnd prem. Prem starts to walk to her but stops when he sees MM go towards her. MM goes and hugs her and prem turns around. He wipes his tears,looks bacl heer and flicks it away.

He starts to leave and the lady (who confessed) tells him that he didn’t tell heer that he got her out and used all his power to do so and now she will think that MM got her out. She says that she has been doing business for 2.5 years and has seen strange people but not such a strange relationship. She says that maybe this is love. Prem just looks at her cryin and heer looks at him crying and she is still not hugging MM back
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Post by priya_19 on Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:05 pm

19 may-08
ha. meher/rano is arranging some books when the mean stepsister/cousins walks in and hands her a packet off clothes ...while insulting her and complaining about the weight off the packet....she tells her to wash up the clothes except for one shirt which is his... meaning preets....

evil witch comes to heer and hands her some clothes with jewelry telling her to give it back after the party.... witch also badmouth prems father for not keeping his promise ( gifting clothes and jewelry to heer) ... and then how much she loves her despite off being so rude... she was the one who freed her form jail and send manmeet to help her.....so also mentions that a guy as manmeet is hard to find especial for a girl who's name is tainted....

lalit is having a talk with some friends and inform them that he has a suprise in store.... meanwhile preet is in his room when the DB ( dumb blond) comes and ask why he isn't ready ... he blast at the person who cleaned his shirt.. DB realizes her fault and blames rano for that.... our witch walks in and Q. DB for her presence in preets room after explaining to her that preets shirt has some stains... witch calls for rano and shouts at her... rano cries and witch taunts her for that....DB is send to get a new shirt but preet doesn't wants it.... so witch gifts it too meher/rano .....

chacha comes heer to talk about the land off her father... cause he needs it for their wedding.... he pleads to her to sign it over .... after some emotional talk he walks off....

on the roof....

heer remember her father.... and then sees prem.....she tries to pass him but he keeps blocking her... ( ore piya playing in the background) and then she finally manged ... he then grabs her arm and ask why there is so much pain in her eyes .... heer tells him there is nothing... prem tells her that where pain is ... we dont need to talk cause they tell there story without talking.....heer looks away form him and says that manmeet is waiting for her... prem immediately leaves her arm....and heer walks away...prem looks up to the sky and wants to know why he is doing so while he knows she belong to another and so does he.....

in the party...

lalit welcomes manmeet and mother.....and ask about his father....MIL tells that he will join them soon... heer comes and takes her blessing... lalit is stunned to see heer... witch wonders why... lalit walks over to her and ask why heer isn't wearing the jewelry and clothes that he send for her... Witch tells that maybe her didn't liked it... and lalit tells yes could be cause G. taste is old fashioned.... G has joined them and lalit teases her... while witch thinks how stupid lalit is....

witch joins heer and manmeet and compliment them on their jodi... she then takes them to meet the guest... MIL get worried about manmeet and how he can reacted so decides to follow them.....

chacha announces an performance.. and we see bhoomi off khunki dancing on aaja nachle....meanwhile DB threats rano/meher as an servant and badmouth her in front off her friends...who then insults her too.....meher hears everything and walks off crying and hurt....

witch sees MIL and walks over to her and MIL informs her about the state manmeet is in....witch wonders what will happen now.....
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Post by priya_19 on Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:05 pm

20 may-08
it starts with bhoomi performing on aaja nachle and DJ worryign about manmeet and how she will take him out. she bumps into harman and wonders if it was a mistake or harman is after her. he asks her why she is tensed and she says that she is thirsty so he offers her his water and then a napkin when she spills it. he leaves and dj is convinced that harman likes her(u need to give harman a little more credit than that..i mean he cant THAT dumb)
preet is speaking to someone on the phone and ash comes there and asks him who it was. he thanks her for giving him the number of her friends and leaves from there. dj comes to ash who stading there with a long face and tells her to pay attention to prem (who is coming down the stairs with his other bros) she tells her that she has no brains so at least take care of her face.
all 3 come down and harman appologses again and prem and he hug and preet comes and hug them as well.(u know i have always wondered how a man like lallu get such tall goodlooking sons????) lallu tells them to go the party and they all leave when gaya3 stops him and tells him that she will get him his love back. just then thery show heer standing wit manmeet.
the waiter comes there and offers them drink and they both reach for the same drink. they stand there holding the drink and o re piya plays.
preet announces a game for all the youngters and dj tells ashpreet that this the prefect opp for them to sneak MM out. preet is explaining the rule sof the game when he sees MM leaving and brings him back. there gaya3 comes and takes ashpreet away. in the game everyone has to wear a mask and dance with the person who has the same number on their mask as them (we all know where this is going) preet puts a mask on ashpreet and dj gets a chance to take MM out as no one recognizes him. here meher also puts a mask on and dj tells her that kids dont play such games and asks her to go and feed people and then have dinner with the servants later. maher leaves. lallu sees her and aks her to have dinner with them but meher refuses and goes on the terace. while on the terace she sees ashpreet and MM's father taking MM out and he faints. they out him in the car and meher wonders whats going on with him and where they taking MM
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Post by priya_19 on Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:06 pm

21 may-o8
at the beginning we see somegirl with her dupatta over her head entering the party. heer is standing alone when some buddha comes to dj and tells her that their mask numbers are the same so they have to dance together. dj thinks to herslef that MM is not there and heer must be alone so she can make heer dance with that budha. she goes to heer and sees that she doesnt have a mask and gives her her mask.

preet comes and gives a mask to prem but prem refuses to dance. he then goes ans starst announcing the numbers. the couples come one by one and start dancing. preet annouces #2 and its prems number but he refuses to dance. he then announces #7 which is heer and the budhas number. the budha gets excited and dj raises heers hand. prem sees the budha go towards heer and pushes him. they both drop their masks and prem exchanges his mask with the budhas. preet sees this and tells prem to dance with heer. prem and heer go to dance and djs plan backfires. ash comes there and prem annouces #2 again and ash thinks it preets number and goes upto him but preet makes her dance with the budha. dj again gets upset. preet announces that indian idol singers are here and they start singing bol halke halke which premmer dance. heer pulls away from prem but he pulls her back.

gaya3 comes to dj and tells her that they have to end the game cuz lallu has to announce something. dj gets happy cuz ash will not have to dance with budha anymore. lallu is seen talking to some guy whne the lady with the covered head approaches him. she tells him that prem and ash will not get married. he asks her who she is and how can she stop the wedding. gaya3 and preet come there adn the lady says that they have a reln(she and lallu) that he is hiding form the world. lallu and gaya3 both start crying (too much overacting) and the girl keeps saying that they have a reln and lallu keeps denying it. preet supports the girl. the girl fianlly reveals herself and its veera. she tells then it was preets idea and lallu and preet have one of THEIR marathons (minus the dupatta) and gay3 and veera hug

lallu comes down with gaya3 and annouces that they have givent he party today cuz heer had a BIG part in saving their hotel (i still fail to see HOW...can someone pls explain to me hoe heer saved them..all she did was accept that there is a racket goig on and she is behind it...how is that saving them???) dj comes to heer and sasyt hat the NRI budha is only showing off cuz when it comes to paying for the wedding he is doing nothing. just then lallu announces that he will pay for heer wedding ans also make MM the senior manager in the hotel. dj is shocked and prem keeps looking at heer lovingly the whole time. lallu asks MM and heer to come up and just then meher comes in running and tells everyone that MM is not here as she saw him leave earlier. everyone is shocked to hear that.

meher is trying to explain when MM comes there and taps on her shoulder and asks her if she was looking for him. meher is surprised cuz she just saw him outside. lallu telle her that she must be tired and tells her to go rest. as she is leaving ash stops her and tells her to eat less as all the fat is going to her head (well at least has a head...u have a pumpkin up there)lalu gets heer and MM together and there prem gets suspicious of him and leaves

veera comes down and meets everyone form harman to ash. she then looks at prem as he holds out his arms for her she runs to him. she hugs him and then sees MM and is surprised. she goes up to him and tells him that they met and calls him prashant. he corrects her and tells her that he is MM. she is confused. he leaves form there and she follows him. she tells him that they met at an NRI gathering in london (i thought she was from canada) and they spoke and he called himself prashant. MM tells her that he has never been out of india and stays in ludhiana and then leaves again.

dj and ash are talking and dj tells her that its good they got him the injetion o time or everything wud have been ruined. she yells at ashpreet and ashpreet tells her about veera and prashants meeting in london. dj gets upset and tells her that she will take of teh entire juneja clan tomorrow
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Post by priya_19 on Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:07 pm

22 may-08
at the beginning we see somegirl with her dupatta over her head entering the party. heer is standing alone when some buddha comes to dj and tells her that their mask numbers are the same so they have to dance together. dj thinks to herslef that MM is not there and heer must be alone so she can make heer dance with that budha. she goes to heer and sees that she doesnt have a mask and gives her her mask.

preet comes and gives a mask to prem but prem refuses to dance. he then goes ans starst announcing the numbers. the couples come one by one and start dancing. preet annouces #2 and its prems number but he refuses to dance. he then announces #7 which is heer and the budhas number. the budha gets excited and dj raises heers hand. prem sees the budha go towards heer and pushes him. they both drop their masks and prem exchanges his mask with the budhas. preet sees this and tells prem to dance with heer. prem and heer go to dance and djs plan backfires. ash comes there and prem annouces #2 again and ash thinks it preets number and goes upto him but preet makes her dance with the budha. dj again gets upset. preet announces that indian idol singers are here and they start singing bol halke halke which premmer dance. heer pulls away from prem but he pulls her back.

gaya3 comes to dj and tells her that they have to end the game cuz lallu has to announce something. dj gets happy cuz ash will not have to dance with budha anymore. lallu is seen talking to some guy whne the lady with the covered head approaches him. she tells him that prem and ash will not get married. he asks her who she is and how can she stop the wedding. gaya3 and preet come there adn the lady says that they have a reln(she and lallu) that he is hiding form the world. lallu and gaya3 both start crying (too much overacting) and the girl keeps saying that they have a reln and lallu keeps denying it. preet supports the girl. the girl fianlly reveals herself and its veera. she tells then it was preets idea and lallu and preet have one of THEIR marathons (minus the dupatta) and gay3 and veera hug

lallu comes down with gaya3 and annouces that they have givent he party today cuz heer had a BIG part in saving their hotel (i still fail to see HOW...can someone pls explain to me hoe heer saved them..all she did was accept that there is a racket goig on and she is behind it...how is that saving them???) dj comes to heer and sasyt hat the NRI budha is only showing off cuz when it comes to paying for the wedding he is doing nothing. just then lallu announces that he will pay for heer wedding ans also make MM the senior manager in the hotel. dj is shocked and prem keeps looking at heer lovingly the whole time. lallu asks MM and heer to come up and just then meher comes in running and tells everyone that MM is not here as she saw him leave earlier. everyone is shocked to hear that.

meher is trying to explain when MM comes there and taps on her shoulder and asks her if she was looking for him. meher is surprised cuz she just saw him outside. lallu telle her that she must be tired and tells her to go rest. as she is leaving ash stops her and tells her to eat less as all the fat is going to her head (well at least has a head...u have a pumpkin up there)lalu gets heer and MM together and there prem gets suspicious of him and leaves

veera comes down and meets everyone form harman to ash. she then looks at prem as he holds out his arms for her she runs to him. she hugs him and then sees MM and is surprised. she goes up to him and tells him that they met and calls him prashant. he corrects her and tells her that he is MM. she is confused. he leaves form there and she follows him. she tells him that they met at an NRI gathering in london (i thought she was from canada) and they spoke and he called himself prashant. MM tells her that he has never been out of india and stays in ludhiana and then leaves again.

dj and ash are talking and dj tells her that its good they got him the injetion o time or everything wud have been ruined. she yells at ashpreet and ashpreet tells her about veera and prashants meeting in london. dj gets upset and tells her that she will take of teh entire juneja clan tomorrow
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Post by priya_19 on Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:07 pm

26 may -08
Ash and beeji are argueing wich suit preet has to wear and preet says you 2 decide and after that tell me wich one i have to wear

Ash and beeji goes to Gaytri and beeji tells her Ash ko samalo Gayatri says oke i will do tommorow but beeji says now then gayatri aks them what happened they again begin argueing and gayatri say beeji dont fight todayd as child Ash go and decide wich clothes prem has to wear...Ash say prem..ofcourse ofcourse

Prem comes adn gayatri ask him why he is upset he says nothing i am just from work..He goes to lalits room adn lalit tells him about his addu adn that he had a dil ki rishta with his wife and he self had that with prems mother adn when se died he han again a change and now he is with gayatri and that he want that prem do the same. Prem says i will keep Ash always happy i will think firs about her than about his self. But hs heart is not with him at the moment and when ash gat a place in his heart than it dhadakega...

Ash comes to gayatri asn ask her how she is looking gayatri say very beautifull and ask her if she got thatdress from prem and ash tells her that she didnt got any dress from Prem..Gayatri think about for who was that dress than and say that she knows that prem is marrying of the sake of the family and he wont say anything about the girl.

Meher says to Heer that she is looking very beatiful in her new dress and heer says the same too meher adn then meher leaves for the pooja adn says to Heer to come soon. Heer sits on the bed and see the packet of the dress adn than a bill an a price tail the dress is very expensive and then thinks that she maybe tooked the wrong packet and goes to call the shop

Dj pick up the phone and some woman say me hoon kaki and i am coming tomorrow to lonavla Dj says wrong number and hangs up and say why has se come now. Balwant comes very happy adn ask dj what happened and tells him that kaki is coming tomorow adn after that if lalit comes to know about heer adn meher than he will shoot her we haev to stop her. and she dont know this adress and if she comes i will get her out of house

Heer calls the shop and says that she is talking from prem junejas home they send a packet. The man says yes we had to send it to the outhouse and i did it Heer says can u check of it was for the outhouse or for some where else. He says i am suree it was for outhouse. Then she ask wich name should i wite on teh packet from who is it The man say prem sir. Heer is shocked asn say why did he send this dress i can wear this dress. I have to talk to him what is the meaning of it



Meher comes and sit in the pooja. Gaytri says that she dont see prem yaha pooja shoro hone wali hai where is this boy i have to find him

Prem gets a call adn say did you find something about that number. someone says yes that girl is preeto prem says the whole name she say preeto chawarya. Prem says what chwariya to manmeet ki nam bhi hai that means that girls rishta manmeet ki sath hai but manmeet i didnt saw any other rishtedar or something of him than who is that girl i haev to tell heer about it

(they are walking)Prem says to heer i have to talk to you heer say please go. Prem says please listen to me. Heer say i said i dont have to talk to you please go from here. Prem say please i have to tell you something and then he grabs her by her hand and say what are you doing heer say please go from here why did you give me this clothes who are you I can wear the clothes you gived to me why are you doing this. Prem say leave this all i have to tell you something more important. Heer say noo first tell me the answer of my question why did you give this clothes. you are getting married in some days adn you give me this gift what do i look like for you.. just a girl who is working in your hotel to pay gar ki keraya ab logo ki tokro mein palti hain.. i dont need your clothes adn not your hamdardi she wants to walk away but Prem grabs her. Prem says hamdardi handardi jarata hoon. I want to talk to you I want to tell you something about manmeet. That boy is not good for you. Heer says manmeet ..first you gave me this dress anf after that you aer saying wrong about that human who i am will marry yeh kaise hamdardi hain. Prem says maybe this clothes were for making your happy but yeh baat i am not saying it because i want you happy or unhappy i am saying the truth. Look at me the one you are marrying i want you to be happy you whole life with him adn not destroy your live i wont let you marry some khalat ehnsan donga. Heer say you will stop me from marrying who are you to decide for me why are you doing this and walks away prem goes after her adn grabs her again and say i am destryoing your life tumhare zindagi barbad hone se bacha ra ha hoon us manmeets se bachara ha hoon damnt.Heer asy manmeet is right or wrong who are you to decide. what doe si look like for you nothingg ap apne zindagi mein barhariya or let me do that too she want to walk away but prem grabs her again and say mein tumse door nahi hosakta mujhe khoosi milengi if you are happy in your life adn marry some one who will keep ou happy in your life i will be very very happy.. and then he shouts nahi honga mein koi khoshi nahi hongi muje sab joot. Icant see you with someone else. I cant be happy i will stop you i wont let you do this marriage. Heer says you will stop me from this marriage mein ab ki lakti khon hoon she say the same twice(in a angry tone) Prem says i cant tell you. Ab beej mein kyun ati hain asks heer please let me go where i want if i marry manmeet ro osme one else ab ko ise kya faraq parta hain. I cant let you go say prem and heer asks why. Prem is looking the other way and heer let him looking to her adn then he grabs her very hard and say KYUNKI MEIN TUMSE PYAAR KARTI HOON and heer is shocked adn then they just look in each other eyes adn teh song kis desh mein hai mera dil plays.



Precape:: Heer and prem standing very close to each other and heer wipes prems eyes and prem is doing the same thing after that adn after that head to head and gayatri sees this from a distance.
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Post by priya_19 on Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:08 pm

27 may-08
**Prem tells heer that he loves her. Then goes on to say: I cant be happy to see u with someone else cuz i love you. i love u alot. yes...i have gone crazy but i cant let u ruin ur life...if i see one tear in ur eye my heart will cry...i cant get u but cant let a wrong person have u either. i cant stop u from going with someone but if that person is worng then i WILL stop u and nobody will be able to stop me. getting u a is a dream and i cant see u with someone else...i will die...i am not a god heer and i cant see u with someone else who is wrong for u... dont u dare marry him and until i find out everything about him, dont u even think about him.. i know that i will regret losing u but i wont be able to live if i lose u to someone who cudnt take care of u. so listen to me that i will die but wont let u marry someone wrong.

they keep looking at each other. she wipes his tears and stands real close to him. for a sec it looks as they will kiss he tells her that he loves so much that he can bear to live away from her but can see her unhappy living with someone else. he asks he if she knows what love is and then explaisn that true love shud not be expressed cuz it happens only once and i have loved once and cannot love anyone again and how can i let my love go to wrong hands who cant take care of it. when u leave, i will die but if u cry then i will burn the entire world. i want to live with the feeling that wherever u r yu are happy then i will die peacefully othewise i wil neither be able to live nor die.

they keep standing close togethr when gaya3 sees them and realizes that heer is prems love. she thinks that they are staying in onehouse and marrying 2 diff people. she leaves and suddenly heer sees the challa in prem finger and remembers his engagement. they both step away from each other. and turn away. kabhi alvida na kehna plays and they walk away from each other.

here jhunri the banjaran is shown dancing. other girls come to her and asks why she is doing this and she starts singing the title track and says that they have told each other about their feelings but havent expressed it yet and she gets happy and starts dancing to the title track and on the other end they show premeer

prem comes to the jarata and dj puts tikka on him and heer is shown crying on the steps.

heer is standing on the terrace when dj comes there and tells her that eveyone is working so hard and she is standing here adn resting. heer doesnt pay any attention and dj tells her to go down and get ready cuz the pooja is about to start and her in laws will be coming soon. she drags heer who just follows her like a zombie, she brings her down. and tells her to get ready. mehre comes there and aks whats going one. dj tell her to ask heer and then tells them both to get dressed and taunts them.

dj leaves and heer comes back to her senses and tells meher not to listen to dj as she angry no reason. she wonders where she put her clothes (honey ur wearing new clothes...remember the ones prem bought u) meher stops her and asks her why she is getting dressed. she asks why she is btohering when she doesnt care about MM and doesnt want to marry him. she asks her if she likes prem and heer looks at her shocked. meher say that she knows everything and she has seen the love in prems eyes as well. heer tells her to keep quiet but meher goes on and sya that they both saved each other and if this isnt love then what is...heer says that she will marry MM as he was ma-babaji choice and maher corrects her that their first and last choce was their happyness. heer tells her never to say somethisn like that again and meher tells her that it will be a big deal when it comes out that prem love her and they may thrwon out of the house but who cares. she then tells heer to close her eyes and asls who she can see. Heer closes her eyes and sees prem....
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Post by priya_19 on Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:08 pm

28 may-08
preet goes to lalit and tells him that he had an accident at the entrance... lalit blast at him and ask about the victim if he/she is hurt....preet confirms and lalit sends him and harman out to help the victim in.....

repeat off yesterday last scene between mehek and heer.... heer closing her eyes.... seeing prem and mehek pleading not to marry manmeet...explaining that she wont be happy.....DB interrupts and tell them to stop there drama and join them....( DB didn't hear a thing)....

chachi looks shocked cause harman and preet walk in with Saraswati beeje ( well I must say...the old hack can be found as baa and dadi in khunki and KS)... after scolding preet... lalit and family welcome her and take blessings....beeje has hurt her feet so all take care off her but she is hungry and demands some foot... G calls rano ....chacha and chachi look on horrified expecting beeje to recognize mehek....mehek turns and looks at chachi and the witch winks her to leave .....so poor soul obeys...chachi then forces beeje to go up...

G walks to the altar with the thali ( KGKG plays in the back ground) G. prays for the happines off her family and to keep it save.... she then tell the pandit to start the pooja....G. turns and sees heer walking in and standing on the right side off prem ( while DB stands on his left side) heer and prem look at each other.. G .. turns back to the altar....

prem looks at the DB and then has a eye looking session with heer... and sees manmeet joining heer ( KANK playing) ... the thali is giving to heer and prem while manmeet and DB join them and all do the aarti...

jagaren is going on .... preet is sitting next the the DB, who is ogling at him .... chachi sees everything and is curses her for drooling over the wrong brother....

prems mobile rings ...manmeet sees it and is about to answer it...but prem take his phone back.... the receptionist has called and gives him the address off manmeet girl... so he drives off to the address....

at the place he sees a guy passing by and inform about manmeet a dress... the guy tells him that he lives there ( pointing it out) prem then ask about manmeet wife.. the guy tells him she also lives there... prem suspension is confirmed...

G wonders why prem left in the middle off the pooja....

prem walks up to the house and rings the bell and the woman opens and he ask her name if her name is preetie??? chabaria she confirms and he then drags her with him....

pooja has finished and lalit has an heart to heart with manmeet about his upcoming wedding.... prem walks in and tels that the wedding can't happen....and pulling preeti in to the centre off the room..shocking everyone..
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Post by priya_19 on Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:10 pm

29 may-08
1.As expected that lady claimed that MM was her brother...

2.MM claims that his and Heer's wedding will happen, as he loves her soooo much...

3.Lallu uncle makes a Promise that Heer and MM's wedding will happen no matter what and he makes Prem bring H and MM's hands together...

This is just the first segment...And there is a good news too...in the next segment, looks like the kaki is going to recognise Heer and Meher in front of everybody...

4. Kaki proved to be a disappointment....She was bought over by DJ...She just kept quite in front of the family and people just quitely dispersed...

5.Heer tries to give a lecture on Love to Prem in the typical BT heroine style...

6.Prem challenges Heer on the real Love and he makes it clear to her that real love means not running around the girl and spoiling her name, but even if there is a little bit of gandgi in MM, he will die, but never will allow her let her doli out...

Prem was awesooooooooome....
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Post by priya_19 on Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:11 pm

2 june-08
Heer and Meher are in their room and bebe comes. They are very happy to see her. Bebe brought laddos for them and says i know u 2 are angry on me Heer says noo we are just sad it feeled like we hadnt any love from baro se. Bebe says what i said today was majboori. DJ told me that lalit is chnged very much there was a time that this 2 families were one. I know i cant relace your parents but i can give you the love of a mother. They all cry and hugs eachother

Manmeet talks to Preeto and says it was good that he thought that you was my wife. He wil be very ashamed. He will think that ke use kitni bari ghalati hogahihe and if he shak karge muj par in the feature every one will think ke woh much par ilzam raka hoga. Preeto says your right bahi. Woh pas gaya or hum bach gaye. Manmeet says bas now the wedding should happen soon and all the property will be mine. And heer uske liye mein bhagwan ban choka hoon. Preeto says yes now no one can stop this wedding

Meher is cleaning the floor and Ash sees this and walks to her and say ohh sorry mere dhena hi nahi ta. You cleaned the floor and me ghanda ki ya please clean it again. Meher says i wont do it because you dit is on perpose. Ash says what wont you clean it. Ash grabs Mehers dupatta and says ok than i will clean it Ash wanted to clean the floor with Meher dupatta and at that moment some new girl grabs Ash hand and gives the dupatta back to meher. Ash says Vishaka di you.? Vishaka says yes me what were you doing. I know they arent our rel siters but that doesnt mean that you will handle them like slaves. Ash says you dont know them Vishaka says hut up i know who is kamchor and now it is enough mafi mago. Ash says i wont ask for forgiveness. Vishaka asks forgiveniss from meher and meher says nahi didi ap apne chote behen ko sharmenda kara hi hai. Shaka say now dont worry mein agahi hoon

Prem shirtless talks on the phone and says to some one you are back and he says yes and now dont worry. I know what to do i wont dissapont you. Prem say i know you are more a ffriend than a employer. He says i will get to know verything about this manmeet. he talk to the secreatrise adn she says it look slike you aer close to sir and very wafa dar he says yes what i am is because of him. Prem calls ramu kaka give me my white shirt adn than gayatri comes and gives him his shirt. She say you love Heer na? Prem is shocked to hear this. You are always thinking about her. Prem says no mom there si nothing like that. She says heer tumhare bas bas mein basi hui hai na. Prem says but you know she is not mine. She say i know adn i know you adn oyur dad if you choose heer than your dad adn your relationship will broken but if you choose your father than you wont be the same prem anymore she wants to say that prem must marry heer but then prem say no mein heer se shaadi nahi karna jata. I just want to be a good for her. Gayatri says that boy is not that bad Prem says woh boora hai bohot boora hai he will give heer a lot of pain adn mujhe bardaasht nahi hoga. Gayatri says if heer becomes some one else than tum yeh bardaasht kar sakte ho? tum apne babuji ke kushu ke liye ane pyara ki qurbani dega? Prem says yes if i have to choose betweens a son and a wildcard than jeet sirf bete ki hogi but premi bhi harega nahi. I just want to find some one good for heer some one who will keep her happy love her so much like....adn after that i will go from her life for ever very far . Gayatri says you are lying can you go far from your heer? Prem kasam kati hain apne ma ke sar par and says i dont want to marry heer because dads heart will broken. Gayatri says what about you you want to marry some one else someone who you dont love a little bit. He says gar heer ko khusi nahi milega to mera dil thoot jayega and if i dont maary babuji ki pasand ki ladki than he will be broken and after all i will get the pain

Pandit j say to Lalit khoondeli aisi mile ram aur sita ki jaisi. Lalit says you gaev a great news ap ka mouth meeta karna chahiye balwant say yes ofcourse. Lalit says to gayatri mitahi ..? DJ says dont bother i will bring it. Pandit ji says if this shaadi happpens soon than it is better because asia shug day will come ones in a year. Lalit says hum bhi yahi chatihai so that the wish of my friend becomes true soon. Panditji says yeh liye Prem aur heer ki khundeli. everyone is shocked and Prem hears this. Lalit says yeh ap khalat khundeliya mila hi hai panditji says sorry ghalti hui gayatri sees that prem saw it.

That new boy calls prem there happend saomething ajeebs. He tells that he went to preeto. He was like a seller preeto didnt want to but he insisted so se went and brougt money and i went to her home and i saw a room it looked like the room was close for years adn i saw a womadn painting theer and there were weird sounds. and i think that behind that room all the secreats are hidden. Prem says now to dinf out what is behind that store rooms door wich raaz who family chupa ka raka hai .
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Post by priya_19 on Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:11 pm

3 june-08
some person (MM) is sitting under a duppata in the store room and making weird girly noices. his paresnts come there and wonder what they will do about the noices they are making as they both have to go to the mehndi ceremony. they decide to put loud music and leave so nobody can hear the voices.

here ash is singing "preet meri saanson mein hai" in her room when DJ comes there and tells her to sing the correct version. ash aks her what it is the correct version and DJ starts dacing on "prem meri sanson mein hain" here preet is walking with harmans cell phone and wonders where his phone and remembers that ash has it. he hears the sing and thinks that ash is singing it fro prem and runs to the room. he comes there and sees dj dancing on the song and is shocked. dj sees him and stops and says that she ws teaching ash but they both look around and see that ash is not there. dj excuses hersef and leaves embarrased

preet is walking out when he bumps into ash and asks her why her mother was singing songs for prem. ash says she doesnt know and thats wehn harmans phone rings. preet answers and the person hangs up afte finding out it is preet and not harman. just then harman comes and preet tells him that some mitali called for him form canada. preet and ash leave and harman wonders why preet had to pick up that call.

the mehndi ceremony has started. preet comes down shootimg girls on his camra and ash comes ans asks him to shoot her as well. preert ingnores her and comes and shoots lalits head. prem comes there and the girls birng heer down. prem looks at her and they play do pal" in the background. manmeets parens arrive and prem goes to greet them. he aks about MM and they say that he is sick. prem says that he knows MM didnt come becuase he hasnt forgiven him yet and insists that till MM is not here he cannto let this rasam continue and cannot let ash get mehndi on her hands (yep u read is right...he ssys ash and this confused me cuz what does ashs mehndi have to do with MMs presense)

preeto is at home and putting MM(or that perosn in girls clothing) to sleep by singign jack and jill. she hears the bell and thinsh its the medicine. she opens the door and finds out that the entire paltan has arrived at the house at prems insistence for the ceremony. prem takes care of the decoration, harman of the catering and preet of shooting the video. they all go to work and prem comes and applogises to preeto. he aks about MM and she says that he is upstairs and will be coming down and he can applogise to him then. she leaves prem wonders how to find the raaz.

ok the small chabaria house is not converted to a mansion where heer sees meher crying and they both rememeber their parents. they have an emotional sisterly moment.

prem wanders in the dark corners of the house and hears weird girly noices.. he follows the noise and comes to MMs room. he sees someone sitting on a chair coverd by a duppata. he asks who it is and slips.he gtes and goes to remove the dupatta
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4 june-08
before prem can remove the dupatta..preeto hits him with a jar (on his head) and he falls on the floor knock out ( Preeto 2- prem 0)....preeto quickly runs away and joins the party.... prem regains consciousness and wonders who hit him and is sure that someone didn't wanted him to know who was in the room....
living-room....
mehndi ceremony ( didn't it started yesterday) is about to start and DJ tells Gayatri that she is expected to give a gift to her DIL... gayatri replies while looking at heer... that she will give her daughters a blessing that the mehndi off their Prem will be so deep that it will never vanish....she want to see prem love in the mehndi cause prem could do everything for his love even giving it up...
gayatri is still looking at heer..she request the girls to think wisely before taken a step.. cause in their decision lies the happines off their lives and maayka and sasural....and what their decision might be the consequences will seen in the future... and if the decision will be wrong not only she will cry but also another ( indicating towards prem)....
a lady ask heer who's name will come on her hand... heer sees prem and MM coming down the stairs... ( VZ playing in the back) ... heer and prem are looking towards each other and then she walks towards him...while everyone watches them... she stands in front off him and looks at her hands...telling that the name on her hands will be off the person who prem is floating trough her veins...everyone is shocked.....she then confess her love for prem.. ( must watch seen for harsad expressions)....
Prem is shaken up form his dream and heer is tells the lady to write her to be hubbies name MM.. Prem looks at crying gayatri with a painful expression and tears drop down his cheek... ( VZ playing)
a lady ask ash who's name should be on hers and Ash tells to write a P... DJ warns her to stay within her limit otherwise No men will look at her...after the mehndi is put DJ tell Ash to show it to prem...(apparently by smelling the mehndi love will increase) lalit teases Gayatri to put some mehndi....Ash shows her mehndi to preet and while smelling it he becomes sick and walks off... DJ warns Ash again...
all start to dance on Salaam e Ishq.... prem and heer look at each other while DJ notice that and gets Ash who was trying to dance with preet.......
preeto finally spot her MIL in the party and pulls her aside... prem sees it.. preeto warns her MIL about prem almost discovering their raaz....MIL is shocked and preeto tells her that she will manage the situation.. and their raaz is now in the basement.....
prem wonders what preeto is telling the MIL...and follows preeto...but then loses her again...he wonders what the raaz could be that she is hiding form him.. he need to find out....he runs in a direction ( don't ask) preeto hears someone approaching while she is trying to block a door with cabinet.. preeto then hides herself while prem reaches the spot and wonders where the entrance off disappeared...he walks off looking for the same room he was in before...walking in to a room prem notice its MM room and decides to find some evidence against MM....he starts looking in his bookcase but is caught by heer...
she blast at him for not trusting MM and tells prem how much MM did for her by keeping his parents honer and accepting a orphan girl.. prem wants to say something but heer stops him and says that today she will speak and he will listen...she will finish this "drama " today...she tells him that MM loves her and she has started to have feeling for him.... prem looks at her with a cold but hurtful expression...and before she can continue a voice ask if anyone is here....prem grabs heer and hides behind a door... MM father approaches the room but on seeing nobody he leaves again after closing the door....
prem hold heer rude against him and ask her what was she saying that she is happy with MM and happy with this relation... he Q. her then what was she saying...heer turns he face away... prem shakes her a bit...and ask her then why is she so close to him so close that he can hear her heartbeat...heer looks at him with tears appearing in her eyes... he ask her why is it that she thinking something else, while she means something else and wants something different....and looks for something else???? why is that heer ....why....
lights go on and both are caught by vishaka....
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