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Post by neelam on Mon Aug 31, 2009 12:07 am

Hi friends

Please post only the written updates for kis desh thanks.
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:47 am

3RD MARCH 08 (Monday) D 1ST EPISODE



(THERE MIGHT BE SOME MISTAKES IN UPDATES...........HOPE U WILL UNDERSTAND N CO-OPERATE WITH ME..........N ITS NOT MY WORK GUYS)


It begins with a song that Ekta always use for her serials.
A little girl is praying and says: Bhagwanji mein yahaan chupie
hooon kisi ko bata mat chal ne dena. Mujhe esa gift do ke jo mein
hamesha yaad rako. A key falls is her hand. She ask yeh chabie kis
chiez ke hay? and she dont take it with her.
A girl(Mahi) is running in the night when she stops with running
someone is behind her it is Meet she says kitna intezaar kya meine
tumhara kyun nahi aya he says ke mein aya tha par tum chala gaya tha.
She says to kya kari kisi aur ke saath shaadi karti mein. People are
coming toward them (parents and other)they hide in a cottage. They yell
Mahi bahar aja mandap se bagh aya hai tu. Her father says if you dont
come back mein tumhe zinda jaladoenga. The boys says go back mahi iI
dont want that you family kill you. Mahi: mujha zindagi nahi tumhare
saath har khushi chatie hai.Agar mein jaoengi woh zindagi mere liye
moth se bi batar hogie. The liitle girl comes and Mahi says Heer tum
yaha kya karahie hoon? she was there play. mahis ays to Heer ke bahar
jaho or ma aur babuji ko bataho ke mahi use buhot pyaar karti hein par
bahar nahi asakti hein. Mahi burn the house by her own and escape from
there.
Heer: mere kismat prem ki saath jor chokiti. Mere babuji ki ghareebi
dost ki beta Prem. Uncle ji Cnada chale gahe hein but mein janti hoon
ke dish badal jane se mera aur prem ke rishta wont change.







14Years later.
We see canada and Prems father he feels very lonely he miss India.
He wants to go back to India he wants to to his friend and want that
prem and Heer marriage take place.
Heer runs in someones baho mein just like dilwale dulhanya
lejayenge. Heer: bohot intezaar kya hai mein tumhara shukur hai ke tum
agaye .someboy says: Mujhe shaadi karogie and she says yes i love u
very much Rohit and a little boy says CUT CUT and says it is not Rohit
but Rahul. It's actually a girl(meher) who was playing the boy. Heer
says bas bas mujhe jana hay meher babuji ko khana dena hai. Heer goes
to her father and we see Heers mom praying. She sees a necklass and
says something i didnt get it about I miss and i know u do miss us (i
think she is talking about Mahi) later teh father comes and says tum
use yaak karte karte use bhool jate hoon. she says i can forget my self
but not her father consoles here and her comes and says Darjeet chahi
agahie. Drjeet comes out of a car and all the mens are looking after her
Precap:
Darjeet: parchahiji mein to kehti hoon bhola ho prem ko canda se
karado dhone behnoki ek mandap me shaadi aur waiseji Heer is older she
must marry first
.









CREDIT: WIDA (INDIA-FORUMS)
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:47 am

4th MARCH 08 (Tuesday)

The episode begins with a lady walking with
long hair with paranda and the guys are falling left and right looking
at her beauty..everyone i stunned and the guys start following
her...she is eating sugarcane...everyone is fida on her and theres a
large queue behind her and everyone is trying to impress her..she takes
out a paper from her salwar and throws it to the guys..they scrambble
to get it...finally a guy picks it up and gives it to her and its a
handkerchief, she wipes her face and gives it back to her and says
thank you with all possible nakhare and attitude..the guy almost
faints...she is the chachiji aka Daljeet of the house...


At the house, she enters and seeks blessing
from the parjaiji and her husband, the girls at home, come and say
welcome chachiji...Daljeet says, do I look like a chachi? The girls are
stunned...Daljeet says, times hae changed, now everyone calls each
other by names...Parjaiji comes and tells, in our house, we always
respect elders..Daljeet says, how does it matter, it all depends on the
person..there her husband very happily carries her suitcase
upstairs..Dal is busy admiring herself in the mirror..the girls are
amused..Parjaiji asks why the kids havent come..Dal is too busy looking
at herself..when she turns to talk, she trips on the table and almost
falls, to the shock of everyone, into the arms of her husband...he
says, "haye mein mar jawa" meaning, ooh I wish I could die at your
beauty and Daljeet heaves a sigh, he asks if any thorn has pricked
her...right then bhaisahab comes in and Dal and her husband abandon
holding each other hastily..Veerji asks how they are...Balwant says
they are all fine..Daljeet says, parjaiji, you were asking about the
kids..well how do you expect them to come to the dusty village, amidst
bad roads...parjaiji and veerji seem hurt..Balwant,her husband, says,
what are you saying Daljeet..I grew up in this same village and have
sepnt half my life here...veer asks him to let it go...and they talk of
Meher's alliance in the city..Dal says, they are good people, she is
lucky to get the relation ans will be happy and says, parjaiji if the
relation for heer is also done at the same time, call prem from canada
and get both the sisters married at the same time, Parjaiji seems
uncomfortable..so does Veerji and others...she also says, Heer is
elder, she should get married first...Heer is tearful..


Heer is standing in the fields and is looking
at the pigeons and thinks of what Daljeet said..Meher comes running
calling out for her and says she has been looking out for her...then
she sees Heer watching the pigeons..and asks why..Heer says, like these
birds..one day I will also leave this house the same way..with the one
my fate has already decided...the birds fly away except one....she
says, all the birds leave except this one..i dont know for whom it
keeps waiting...Meher says, you are not like the others,you are like
the alone bird..waiting for the one..you are upset with what chachiji
said na, dont be, she has an attitude and is rude...Heer says, no I am
not upset with her or neither am I the lonely bird..I will also one day
leave my house with the one i have in fate, whom I cannot see, but one
day i will leave forever with him..Meher says, if you see from where I
see, you are a kind of girl..who will build a house where your heart
is...and now it only remains to see which country your heart lives
in..Meher leaves..and Heer is thoughtful...the title track plays...


Veerji and Balwant are sitting in the field
and looking at the fields and discussing about the cost of the
field...Balwant says you should sell this field and come with me to
Ludhiyana..let me do some service for you...Veerji says, i told you
before too..after our father left, you put yourself on my shoulder and
this field is like my mother..has given me everything..they both get
teary eyed..and Balwant says I promise I will never ask you that ever
again...Veer says, its ok...Balwant then asks, how is lalit ji...if he
has spoken to him lately...Veerji seems sad and thinks of the last time
they spoke when Lalit had decided to leave the country...flashback of
the conversation between lalit and veer are shown and how lalit wants
to leave the country bcoz he is frustrated with the beuracracy of
everything and how he has to beg for things to get done...veer tries to
convince him otherwise and tells him tht everyone in the village is
there own and lalit does not agree to it..Veer tells them how they are
related..throught the village..Lalit says you dont see it..outside this
country there is lot of opportunity...Veer says you want to leave this
country? Lalit says I have a sister and she said she will fix some
business for me..Veer says, business? you want to leave your home
country and lalit says I will go and i will keep my country alive
there...Veer says you will never be able to do that...lalit says I have
decided I will go...The flashback shifts to the station..lalit is ready
to leave..Veer and parjaiji are there..so is lalit and his wife..veer
is standing facing another direction a lil further away from them and
Parjaiji asks Lalit how is he going to travel..Lalit says, from to
delhi and then in flight...they all keep looking at Veer standing at a
distance..


Lalit comes to Veer and says I am going
away..wont you talk to me..Veer calls Parjaiji and gives her 12000Rs
and tells her to give it to Lalit..and says it will be of use for
him...Lalit says you are giving me your years earning...veer does not
even turn while giving it..everyone is tearful..Veer says, you will
need the money, being all alone there, I am here, if something happens
the whole village is there with me...Lalit is crying and puts a hand on
veers shoulder..Veer asks Parjaiji to tell lalit that he swears, that
till the day he comes back to his country, not to mail or call
him..everyone is shocked....Parjaiji gives lalit's wife some food and
gives her the soil of the village to remind them of their
homeland...they all are emotional..veer still does not turn towards
them..its time for the train to leave..and they get on the train and it
leaves...veer still does not turn..Lalit is standing by the door and
keeps looking..when the train crosses them..veer looks at it
leaving....flashback ends...Balwant asks so till date you have never
spoken to him or heard of him? veer says how would he, I gave him my
promise..Balwant says i trust Lalit ji, he is true to his word, he will
come back someday soon...Veerji is sad..Balwant says, its getting late
now, the groom side must be coming any moment, we should head home and
they leave for home...


The groom side come in a big car..and all
preparations are going on...everyones dancing and singing...everyone
seems happy...Daljeet sturts around and every guy is looking at
her...and trying to impress her...she notices Pinkyji(someone!) and
says, those (looking towards the guys standing on the terrace) are
small, i mean those up there are small tasks, I have already done the
big task...the boy is mine, she corrects herself and says, afterall I
am the one who chose the groom..the grooms side have all
arrived...everyone goes to greet them..and Daljeet goes to meet them as
well...and Dal introduces the mother and father and Bebe to
Veerji...they all welcome inside..


There Heer is complaining tht she isnt getting
ready and she has been standing here with the dress for 2 hours and the
guys have already come..Meher says i dont want to wear this, what will
i control, myself or the weight of this dress...she suggests she will
wear Veerji's kurta..Heer gets worried and convinces her to wear the
traditional dress...Meher is all ready and set...parjaiji is admiring
her..Daljeet walks in and says..I had never thought...that before the
elder one, the younger one will get married..every one is
uncomfortable..Meher is anger...Dal says, Meher was supposed to get
Heer reayd, not Heer has gotten Meher ready..they look at each other
and Heer is sad...


In the night..Heer is standing alone..parjaiji
comes and says,I know one day, your Prem will come, from far across
this world...they say before time and before destiny, one does not get
anything..one day you will also get what you want and then nothing can
stop your beautiful doli..Heer listens and looks sad...Parjaiji
convinces her and then they hug...Parjaiji is tearful....



Precap:
1. Bebe is complaining that how is this
happening, that the older daughter is still unmarried and the younger
one is getting married..Parjaiji and Heer get upset..and she says,
there must be something wrong with the girl (What the hell!!!lady I will show you what is wrong , its your mind!)

2. Daljeet is talking to Veerji, and says why
dont you do it once and then corrects herself and says I mean phone,
why dont you make the call ones, why so much ego and arrogance..once
call and confirm for youself atleast...

3.Veerji picks up the phone to call...
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:48 am

5th MARCH 08 (Wednesday)

The episode starts with Heer bringing Meher
downstairs..Meher seems least interested...they bring her to where
everyone is..Daljeet sees and makes a face...Veerji looks at Meher and
Heer and thinks..Heer makes Meher sit by Bebe..Balwant talks to Veerji
that Meher looks so beautiful..Veerji says, you never know when
daughters grow up...you were right, it was always a good idea to invest
in stocks...Balwant says, you dont worry about tht, your money is safe
with me and you will get it doubled...Veerji says, as long as you are
there, I dont need to worry about anything...

Bebe looks at Meher and says, Your friend is
also very pretty..Parjaiji says its my elder daughter..Bebe says she is
married right? Parjaiji says no..bebe says, the elder is sitting
unmarried and you are getting the younger one married...everyone is
shocked....Daljeet siezes the opportunity and says, Heer is one in a
million, she is already married...in her childhood..to Prem, son of
Lalitji, they are very rich..but its a different thing tht they havent
spoken ever till date...but he is very strong in his word..isnt it so
Veerji, Veerji agrees tht he is true to his words...the grooms mother
says, the guy is from Canada, and they havent spoken ever, now a days
even the village boys dont wanna marry..wht will he wht if he doesnt
come back? bebe says there must be something wrong with the girl...the
other woman agrees..Heer feels ashamed..and Daljeet smirks...Heer
leaves...


Heer is standin in the terrace and Parjaiji
tells her not to take it to heart what they said, they named her Heer
for a reason, it was clear night with stars alite, like it was diwali
and then you were born at 12:30 and like the whole world became
beautiful...Heer looks up at the sky..Parjaiji says, you are related to
this vast sky...dont worry..and she then tells her about Prem's birth
and how he never used to sleep and would cry all the time...and then
how suddenly he started sleeping and prems mom and I would joke tht may
be he would cry becoz he didnt get you...Heer says, what has these
stories got to do with my life, was the marriage fixed bcoz Prem was
Dad's friends son...Parjaiji says, no, your love story was written by
God...and tells her about the Heer Ranjha explain..and says, you were
made for each other...you are Prem's heer...and it is a mothers wish
that the night this sky will shine with all its glroy, my Heer will get
her Prem..and Heer shys...and smiles..and Prjaiji leaves...


Veerji is standing, Daljeet says what would I
do, all the men were there..I mean the whole village was there..whose
mouth would I shut..now everyone will talk about it...what would we do?
She says you have never seen the guy..neither has Heer..he lives in
Canada..who knows how he is...may be he has had affairs or even married
someone...Veerji shuts his eyes in pain..Daljeet sees Parjaiji and
says, gone is the time when Heer used to wait for Ranjha..I say we
should look here, there are plenty here..Balwant looks on..veerji says,
no need to talk to anyone..i know my friend and his son helps him in
busines...Daljeet says, well, what if something bad happens? People
will only call Heer names of characterless, bad and something not right
with her....veerji say looks angry...Daljeet says, well why dont you do
it once then...i mean make the call once, why so much ego and arrogance
about it? Call and confirm for yourself...Veerji gets angry and says, I
will not do anything llike tht, if Lalit had to break the promise he
would have long time back...i know him and he will keep his word..and
Veerji storms out...Parjaiji follows him and says, you are very right,
and we all know the relation is very pure..but to shut other peoples
mouth, why dont you make the call once? Please talk to them..veerji
leaves...and later thinks of what Bebe, Daljeet and others talked about
Heer...He is having a hard time and he looks at the phone....and
deicdes to make the call..he goes to the phone and picks up the
receiver...and calls the exchange..and asks him to make a call to
Canada and gives the number...


There is party going on..and someone else
picks up and Veerji asks if its lalitji's cell phone..The guy says
yes.and asks who is he? Veerji says he is calling from India..the guys
asks him to hold for a second...and he goes to call Lalitji..it is
shown tht he has become very famous and it is a party in his
honor...everyone is congratulating him and the press is hounding
him..the guy goes to Lalit and says you have a call sir, and Lalit says
later, the guy tells Veerji to call later..Veerji says, please tell
lalit its his friend Balraj from India..The guy says ok and tries to
reach Lalit..who is being swarmed by people who are congratulating
him..finally when Lalit is getting up on the stage, the guy reaches
Lalit and says, sir its a call from your friend..Lalit, questioningly
asks, which friend..Veerji on the line hears this and is shocked...the
guy says, you please try to understand lalit ji is getting
angry..Veerji thinks how can Lalit forget his country and his
friend...Veerji tells him, please will you try again...the guy goes and
stands by where everyone is standing..and here Lalit is giving a speach
as to how one leaves their own country to settle in another country and
makes it their own..and tht people should let the past be past and move
on..Veerji hears this and is shocked....he lets the receiver fall off
and is stunned...he walks off alone at night in the field..Parjaiji
comes running calling out for him and asks where is he going...he does
not answer and keeps walking off..parjaiji is tearful...veerji walks on
and remembers his old friendship days with Lalit and how they were
close..he goes to a small temple and remembers something from the
past...and how lalit had shown Veerji the cards for Heer-prems marriage
and how Lalit had promised him tht Heer and Prem would get married
here...and they place the cards at Gods feet...flashback ends and
Veerji keeps thinking of the day Lalit left..He sits by the small
temple and cries (I felt so bad..poor Veerji )..he
walks to the other side of the field, still tearful and sits on the
ground..parjaiji comes running and asks what is wrong and she is
scared...Veerji doesnt say anything..but turns towards Parjaji and
parjaiji sees him crying and gets scared and begs him to tell what
happened..Veerji says, after going to a differnt country, his friend
changed...Parjaji aks now what will happen to our Heer...and They hold
each other and cry..(So sad..such awesome acting!!)
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6th MARCH 08 (Thursday)

The episode begins with a tearful Parjaiji and Veerji and they cry
to each other about how Lalit changed...how he forgot
everything..Veerji tells his whole phone experience to Teji...they show
flashback of yest's episode and there is one part that they didnt show
yest..which is when the guy tells Lalit its Balraj's phone and Lalit
does not hear the name correctly and thinks its someone else...and then
the whole pardes thing tht Lalit says, Veerji narrates to Teji..


Here Lalitji continues to say, thats what many people think, but I
dont think so, I still value my country and my friends back home, my
friend Balraj who gave me his whole years earning for me..that even
though I cann earn in a minute, but I can never repay back...I still
value my friends and every single thing back home so much that I
promise, I lalit Juneja will return home and he explains how much he
misses his country and he will retunr for sure..he is
tearful...everyone is super impressed....


There Veerji and Teji cry to themselves, misunderstanding tht Lalit has changed....and cry for Heer...

At night, Meher and Heer are sleeping..and Meher is eating
something..Heer tells her to stop disturbing her sleep..Meher tells
Heer she does not want to get married in a rather coarse voice..Heer
asks what happened to her voice..to which Meher excitedly gets up and
says that in the morning she had eaten many Amrudh and thus her voice
has gone sore..heer scolds her and tells her to take care of her voice
else the guys family will ask for more dowry and say somethings wrong
with her voice as well..Meher says what if the guy is like a wolf or
something..suddenly then they hear a wolf howling type noise and they
both get scared..Heer says this sounds like its coming from inside our
house..Meher is scared..they come downstairs to check out n hear the
howling noise again..they walk slowly towards where Daljeet is sleeping
and figure out that its Chachiji who is snoring away to glory! Heer
says, thats why Chachaji is so scared of her, bcoz in her sleep she
becomes a violent lioness(in her sleep only?? is he sure??LOL)There
Daljeet is in deep sleep...suddenly she wakes up and walks
stylishly...both meher and heer walk in and they tease daljeet by
calling her chachi..Meher asks if she dresses up always like this while
going to sleep and Dal says, yeah, what if someone comes to see
her..and she struts around..they both call her chachiji and leave..Dal
feels they are calling her chachi at such an young age and make her
feel..old!


Next day morning, Heer is running behind Meher..she suddenly hears
an airplane fly overhead and stops to look at it and thinks..Meher
says, one day he will also come and fly you away with him..Heer
realises and says you talk too much these days and hits Meher...Meher
asks her why she hit her and they run around the fields behind each
other...there Teji and Veerji see them running happily and feel
sad..suddenly Meher throws her dupatta and it falls on Heer..its a red
dupatta..and Heer stops..and scolds Meher..they see veerji n Teji and
complain to them..Heer notices them sad..and asks whats wrong..they
dont say anything and Veerji leaves..Heer asks Teji as to why papaji
left like this..Teji cries that why did this happen, when it was
written in your fate..and tells her all about the happenings of the
night..and leaves heartbroken..Heer is shocked and hurt..she walks
alone in the fields...and thinks what Teji had told her the night
before about how she and Prem were made for each other..and she keeps
walking alone...


Daljeet feels bad for Heer and says what will happen to her now..she
was waiting for him for so long and now she will keep waiting for
ever...how sad..Balwant stands up n Daljeet realises and says I am
sorry, i hurt an already broken heart..but people will say that the
younger one is all set to get married but the elder is still at home
everyone looks shocked..Daljeet continues to say people will say
something is wrong with heer...I told you while bringing relation for
Meher, I will bring one for Heer, but no you all were singing the same
story of Canada...people will say that, I am not saying it..Veerji
decides he has had enougha n walks out of the house..Teji runs behind
asking him where he is going..but Veerji tells her not to and he
leaves...everyone at home is sad and unhappy...


In the evening..Daljeet says you are so cold..you dont have control
over your husband..now you see its such a cold night, what if something
happened to him i mean like him catching a cold...and then Veerji
enters...everyone comes running..and Teji asks where he had
been..Veerji asks Teji to forgive him..and tells he has broken off
Mehers relationship..Balwant goes to say something, Veerji says I dont
want to get Meher married and destroy the older ones life..everyone is
shell shocked...


Veerji sits on the small charpai..and Heer comes to him and sits
down and asks why he did what he did...and why he destoryed Mehers
happiness for her..she was getting a good house and life, thats all she
wanted for her..she says I have seen Prem in your eyes, and if he is
not in your eyes, he is not in mine either..I have full trust in your
choice..and I know you will do the right thing for me..you please tellt
he grooms side that Meher will get married to him...Veerji is impressed
and tells I am so lucky to have you and I hope God gives a daughter
like you to all...Meher says next time when you look for a boy, please
make sure he does not snore..they all share a happy family hug...



In the morning..Lalit is doing pooja and Gayatri is standing by his
side..he turns to see her and Gayatri tells him tht she has seen him
for so many years, he has never forgotten to do the worship the Sun
God...Lalit says, how can I ever forget my land, my country, there
everyday morning while worshipping i could say beautiful land and the
fields, here its only concrete, I promise very soon we will go back...


Teji is dusting the carpet early morning and someone knocks on the
door..she wonders who it could so early..and goes to open the door..she
opens it and is shocked...Veerji peers to see and is stunned as
well...Heer standing upstairs..turns slowly looking perplex
ed..or may be not..LOL..and the episode ends..
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:49 am

10th MARCH 08 (Monday)

here's what happend,

at Heer's house:
someone knocks on the door and Parajai ji open's the door....it's
the same people who brought the rishta for Meher....they welcome them
inside and Heer's dad apologize for not being able to do the
rishta,....the groom's father says that they have never met a family
who waited twenty years for a promis that was given to a friend and a
daughter who belived in her dad's decisions so much that she agreed to
marry a man who she has never seen ...and asks for heer's hand in
marriage for their son....everyone is shocked....Heer walks off and
Meher follows....heer's dad says he wants to ask heer about her
desicion before giving an answer....they agree.....Heer's dad walks
toward Heer...she smiles and hug him....Heer's dad get happy and tell
everyone the good news and they congradulate each other....

Heer ask Meher whetehr she felt bad that....she agreed to this
marriage for her father....Meher says no and ask whether Heer is
happy...she says a person can never make any relationships with the
sky....and they can never break any relationship with the floor they
live in....and starts crying (sad version of thetitle song plays)

at Lalit's house in canada:
Lalit's wife is putting Jwellery boxes on the bed and Lalit asks
what's going on....she says i'm choosing jwellery for my daughter in
law Heer....i bought these a long time ago....she was just a kid
then....don't know whether these will fit her or not....

at Heer's house:
sangeeth ceremoney is in full swing and heer's parents bring heer
down stairs and they all dance to the song Lajja Lajja (from kubhi
kushi kubhi gham)....scene changes to Lalit's wife who's holding a
dimond bangle....then they show heers in laws putting bangles on Heer's
hand ...in canada Lalit's wife is holding a neckless... at heer's house
her in laws are putting a neckless on her...lalit's wife is choosinga
mang tika for heer....at heers' house her mother in law is putting teh
mang tika on her...then she put the red cloth on her....

Heer's dad is drunk and her mom is scolding him for doing
so....heer's dad holds her hand and everyone is laughing...he starts
singing for her...then she sings for him and heer...heer crys and sings
as well

heer's family and the groom's family are sitting together and
groom's mom ask for water from the fridge...heer's mom says they don't
have a fridge....groom's parents look at each other...then she says
that's okay then bring what ever they have....daljeet says don't worry
Veerji has a big land and he'll give it to heer as the dowry....heer's
dad says he can't give it as it belongs to someone else...heer's mom
says they should have the engagment ceremoney tommorrow so all the
relatives can see them and give their blessing....grooms parents get
scared....(i think they are hidding something aboutr the groom) but
later agrees and says they'll bring him....

at Lalit's house in canada:
Lalit brings three tickets to india....and his wife says at least
ask prem....Lalit says it was my dream to see Heer as my daughter in
law and on the 15th of march we will goto india and to talk about their
rishta

at heer's house:
pandith says that 15th march is the auspisious day to get Heer married and everyone get's happy
at a mandir:
Heer tell god that my marriage is fixed all my life i thought that
prem is going to be my life partner but now someone else is gona take
that place....there's prem who i never met and still feel like i know
him...but on the 15th march i will be someone else's. what have you
written in my destiney... Heer says she need and answer to one question
and take the key that she got when she was young.....and ask god what
door in my life is this key going to open?...
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:50 am

11th MARCH 08 (Tuesday)

The episode starts with Teji giving Veerji his
shawl..Veerji asks if the kids have fallen asleep...Teji is in
thougths..Veerji asks whats the matter..Teji says, maybe Daljeet spoke
a little too much about what we have to give the grooms..the car and
all is a little bit too expensive at 4-5 lackhs...Veerji reassures her
that everything will work out fine as the crops this year have been
really good and that they will sell for good also..he also reassures
her that next year even Meher's marriage they will do it with all
grandeur...Teji looks convinced...

Next day morning in Canada, Gayatri is doing
pooja path with other ladies...two ladies start gossiping about how
they are excited with junior bacchan visiting their house..Gayatri
looks irritated..and looks at them..she scolds them and says Bebe is
sitting here..you are talking like this..Bebe says if I could in my
age, i would have also gone hot hot for bacchan...and gayatri is
shocked...they suddenly all turn back and see Lalit ji dancing and
coming downwards...everyone is shocked and amused...gayatri goes with
the arthi thali and asks him what is he doing with such a
getup..lalitji says, today is India-Canada footbal practice match and
he is going for tht..Gayatri says its for kids, what r you gonna do
there, Lalitji says I am going to cheer them up..after all its against
"Firangi" people...Gayatri asks him if Prem will agree (to what I dont
know!!)and Lalit says, he knows his son, prem wont have any problems
and he takes the arthi..and starts humming a song...gayatri feels
embarassed and tells him to leave quick and then thinks out aloud that
Balraj bhaisahab, your friend has changed so much after coming to
Canada..what do I do with him now...


Back in India, everyones busy preparing
for Heer's marriage...Veerji and Balwant and calculating things for the
marriage....someone comes..Meher opens the door and its Babaji...they
all welcome him...and Veerji asks Meher to get Lassi for Babaji..Meher
goes the kitchen and teases Heer and says someone has come ..Heer looks
on expectantly..Meher says dont look like Kajol from DDLJ, you Ajay has
not come..Heer makes a face and Meher says Babaji has come...they are
all making roti's, Meher goes to take something from the plate and Heer
does not let her..Meher complains to Teji that Heer never lets her eat
anything...Teji looks at them and smiles..Heer tells Teji to tell her
something...she has become fat..Teji says let her eat na..she will eat
here as much as she wants, not at her inlaws place..Daljeet comes in
and says Heer is saying correct..Meher has indeed become fat and that
guys these days look at figure before looking at the eyes..Meher teases
Daljeet for doing work..and Teji tells her to stop ...

Teji comes and ask if they would all like to have food...The guests say
they will wait till the groom comes..they wait till about 4 pm and the
groom hsant arrived yet...they all seem worried...Babaji tells them to
call the airport and find out...they find out the flight is on
time...babaji and others leave..teji and Veerji is look on disappointed
and worried as the engagement is shortly...

Meher looks out of the window in the evening and the grooms family has
arrived...she announces to all and they all rush to welcome the
family..Meher and heer look on in the anticipation of the
groom...everyone comes in..but the groom doesnt..Veerji also looks
worried...he asks Manjeet where is Damadji..and Menjeet questions if he
hasnt come, rather surprised..Veerji says no, Manjeet says I spoke to
him from airport, he said he was gonna coem to your place directly...he
hasnt come yet? Veerji and everyone is shocked and worried.Meher
thinks, the guy didnt come? Heer is disappointed...so is Veerji and
Teji...Daljeet looks sarcastic as well..Veerji says we were waiting for
him from morning..we thought he would come with you...Manjeet says he
must have come..des-pardesh issues are a lil different...Veerji says
but we checked the flight was on time...Manjeet's wife says to Veerji
you can see the groom in the marriage, the concept of seeing a guy is
rather recent...earlier they used to get married with just the
photo..Balwant agrees that they should not stop the ceremony and go
ahead with it..Veerji is not convinces..Teji says she will get the
things for the ceremony...

The ceremony begins..they bring in Meher and place a photo of Manmeet
in the plate..and Teji gives Heer the ring and Manmeet's mom tells her
toplace the ring near the photo..Heers takes some time..Daljeet asks
her to do the same..and finally hesitantly Heer keeps it..Veerji keeps
looking on unconvinced and thinks of how Heer told him tht she will
marry any guy as long as its his choice..Veerji then thinks, likeness
is far away, i havent even seen the groom here..Manmeet's mom asks
Heer's hand and she gives it, as she is about to put the ring on Heer's
finger, Veerji asks them to hold it for a minute..everyone is left
shocked.
..Veerji
tells them to stop...he goes inside and calls teji inside..everyone is
shocked...Balwant, Daljeet and Teji follow him..Teji comes in and asks
why he stopped the engagement..what will the whole family and the
village people say..Veerji says...they came, saw our daughter and
house...did we see their son or the groom? I have made this mistake
once,I will not do it again! Its the life of my daughter...Balwant asks
why he is talking like this at this point..Daljeet unable to keep her
chattering mouth shut says what will people say, if the engagement
breaks off then you know tht in India, no one will wanna marry
Heer...why didnt you think of this when your friend broke off the
alliance..Veerji and Teji look on..Balwant agrees with Daljeet(Joru ka
gulam!!) Balwant says how many times do you want to break Heers
engagement...he says to Teji that they have to understand...Veerji says
we are girls side so what? She is my daughter...why would I listen to
everything they say...i agree he is my friend..so what..why will i
destroy my daughters life with my friendship..Balwant says what will
happen to Heer, who will take her hand?Veerji says I will keep her at
home, i will sit and cry with her everyday...but I will not want to die
everyday if there is something wrong with the guy and she comes back
heartbroken..wht will i do then? Balwant tries to say something..Veerji
says, No i cannot let this happen...I will not destroy my daughters
lives, they trust me too much, i will not break tht trust...my
daughters are my lives, they are not a burden to me..I will give them
to the guy who will love them, not just get rid of my burden..everyone
is quite..Veerji says he has made up his mind, this engagement cannot
happen now...and he leaves followed by Teji..Balwant and Daljeet keep
looking..


Veerji comes out storming and comes face to face
with Manjeet and tells they have to sto the engagement for two to three
days..everyone is shocked...Veerji says I want to see your son
once...this is not a condition by my daughter..I know my daughter will
marry anyone I say..but this is my daughters life and i cannot break
her trust...Manjeet is shocked and asks Veerji what is he
saying..Someone comes in the house and says, He is not wrong, how can
the marriage happen without seeing the groom? and everyone turns to see
who it is..and the epi ends...
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:50 am

12th MARCH 08 (Wednesday)

The epi begins with Manmeets entry…everyone looks t him, he enters
with a suitcase (Hot alert!!!!uuuuff!!) Everyone is surprised..He comes
and asks for blessing from Veerji..He says its my fault, I should have
reached her in time…its my fault, I didn’t want to come empty handed,
so I missed my flight..you want to do the engagment today or not is on
your elder people, what ever you deicde I will accept it..Veerji is
totally impressed (Dude so am I!!!*Sigh*) Veerji says he saw everything
he wanted..and asks everyone what they are waiting for and they start
playing the dhol etc and Mann gives a gift to Veerji and then he gifts
everyone something…to Heer also…she then hears an airplane flying and
thinks of Prem….

Meanwhile, In canada, India vs Canada match is about to begin..Lalit is
all excited..Gayatri asks him why he is so excited..Lalit says, its his
country…he will rejoice it fully…Gayatri says, your both sons are
playing…Llait says, the full team is my family..and Gayatri smiles…A
friend comes and congratulates them and says they have been waiting for
this day for long….and he asks about Preet…Lalitji is disappointed and
says lets not talk of him….and then his friend asks about Prem..Lalitji
says he must be here somewhere….

In india…engagement is going on….there Prem is getting ready for the
match(must must watch!! Too hot!!)…and Mann puts the ring on Heer’s
finger..as he does tht Prem cuts his finger in the mens locker…(Hottie
alert again!!!! ouch) He opens his locker and takes blessing..and Lalit
says like every house has a temple and lord Ram, my house has Prem…Prem
comes out..into the field..and they all see Prem..and cheer for
him…(Harshadd…..oh la la!) following him Harmeet also enter..and both
the brothers hifive…

The game is all set to begin, toss takes place and India wins…everyones
cheering…Prem starts with kicking and running with the ball..he seems
to be a adept player….the title music of goal plays….and India makes
the first goal…the match continues..and it’s a goal for Canada….Prem
makes another goal..and he makes the third goal as well…Some Canadian
guy says I know his weekness..his shoulder is injured..hit him there
and hit him hard..the match begins again…this desi looking guy elbows
Prem…and he is hurt and falls down…everyone is shocked..Gayatri comes
running down in tears and asks them to stop…Prem stands up in anger and
starts playing..everyone is cheering him…and he gets hit in the
shoulder again…Harmeet shouts for Prem…Lalit and Gayatri cry out…and
wonder where Preet is when he is needed..Prem is injured and the
commentator says they need another Indian player…Lalit says Preet wont
come..Gayatri is confident that his blood has called him, he will
come….they show a hunky guy lying on top of his car….in a deserted
cliff like area….

They show Preet relaxing and he is shown to be a casanova of sorts
..but he opens his eyes as Prem suffers there and stands atop the car
and has a pea**** feather resembling tht of Lord Krishna….he jumps to
the ground, gets into the car…meanwhile in the playground everyone is
wondering where Preet is…there he comes dressed in soccer shorts to the
ground…The coach says if he plays anymore, he will be disabled and cant
play, and thus we cant play too…Harmeet is disappointed…Preet come and
says,w e can and we will…Gayatri and Lalit are surprised…Preet comes to
Prem and wipes his blood from his shoulder with his hand band…and they
both stand up..compared to Ram-Laskhman….(3rd Hot alert!!!)

The commentator announces that the new player tht the team was waiting
for has arrived and he is none other than Preet Juneja..the match
resumes and they all play well and Canada equals the score 3-3…Gayatri
prays…the match is in full swing..and Prett does the last goal….and the
championship cup is given to Prem and congratulated..the brothers stand
shoulder to shoulder…Harmeet, Prem and Preet (OK, now I am almost
drooling!!!)

There in India.. everyone is dancing and rejoicing in the ceremony..and
Heer looking at the moon thinks tht Mom used to say I was made for
Prem..and I didn’t know anything about him…
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13th MARCH 08 (Thursday)

The epi begins with everyone congratulations
Harmeet and Prem…Preet looks on…and then he leaves disappointed..but
Prem stops him from behind and he turns back..they hug each
other..Harmeet joins them and they all hug each other (awww huggies scene!! hehehttp://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley36.gif ) Lalit looks on teary eyed…


In India..everyone is happy and all…Manmeet is
sitting there..everyone is congratulating and all..Manmeet’s mom comes
to manmeet and says be careful what you say and when you opne your
mouth and come home staright from here..Manmeet makes a face…Daljeet
comes to him and says don’t you wanna do something with Heer..then
corrects herslf and says, I mean talk to her and all…and Manmeet looks
at Daljeet (like lady…you and me have same brain!!)all
confused..Veerji says Teji, come lets go..let the kids talk…the elders
all leave behind heer, meher and manmeet..heer just bankly looks on..


In Canada..daiji is forcing Preet to eat
something and complains he has become skinny..and she says she will
replace the veggies in the burger with partha (yuummmmyy!!)
and harmeet asks her not to do so..Daiji reasons with him that when
they can come to Canada and live, so can Paratha go into a burger…she
gives the burger to him and leaves for the paratha..he is about to eat
when another hottie Prem comes and takes it from Preet…Harman comes and
says he is very disappointed…tht he woke up late and lost 2%
profit..and made only 10%..Preet says yeah even he woke up late..Prem
says Harman, I need a new pair of shoes..these have torn..Harman
confused says, Bhaiya you have so many similar..why do you need a new
one then..Prem says exactly my point..why r you reminiscing over 12% be
happy that you made 10% profit (Hai mein marr jawa..kya logic hai!! http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley17.gifhttp://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley17.gifhttp://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley36.gif) meanwhile
Preet says he should enjoy since he won the match..prem says you won
the match? Preet says Yeah I did..i need a gift for tht..Prem offers
his half eaten burger to preet..just then Daiji comes with a plate full
of parathas and tells him to not eat the burger and eat the
parathas..Preet says so many of them? Daiji says you look like moogli
(the skinny jungle boy from jungle book) and you need to eat well….and
I will make you tarzan with my food…


Prem comes to his room and is about to take of
his sweater and he feels pain in his shoulder…Gayatri comes to him and
asks if it hurts him…He says its ok, it will be ok..Gayatri says why
did you do this to yourself..you put forward your arm for the
match…Preet comes and hears their convo…gayatri continues talking to
prem…you knew preet wouldn’t play and you also know he cant take your
pain, so by hurting yourself you kept your fathers name and your
brother Preets too…Gayatri futher says, when sons are born, they are
given a name tht matches their characteristic…you were named prem bcoz
prem is who you are..and says you are love for your parents, your
sisters and your brothers…but I also know the one person you love, you
will give them everthing..and yet I am scared tht you wont profess your
love for them…and may be they wont even understand your quietness..but
you always knew they wont call preet for the game and your dad would
have had a broken heart..but you kept all their wishes and hope come
true..Preet is hearing all this..Prem listens to this with a plain
face…Gayatri tells pram to wait in the room n she will bring him haldi
wala doodh…and leaves…Prem is about to take his sweater off again, this
time he notices Preet and they both hug each other…


Here In India…Manmeet is all set to
leave..Veerji requests him to stay for some more days, Manmeet says it
is good for the groom to stay with the brides family beore marriage and
Veerji and Balwant put him up in a bus…as soon as Veerji and Balwant
leave..manmeet gets off the bus, the bus conductor scolds him for
wasting his and everyones time (serves him right..)
he gets down..looks at the leaving tractor and then takes another
bus…meanwhile veerji and teji discuss the wedding day and how only very
few days remain for it…there Manmeet gets down from the bus and knocks
on another house door..a young woman opens it..and asks him why he came
so late..Manmeet makes an excuse and says he came after a lot of
persuation..and they both go in…


Veerji and Teji talk tht Manmeet is a very
shanaki guy..and he respects all..and he says we will make her marriage
happen with all glory..teji says 20 years of Heers dream broke..what
she thought and what she is getting..but I am glad we got a good groom
like Manmeet..Veerji goes to meet Heer..


In Canada..Prem comes to meet Lalit…and asks
if he called for him..lalit looks at a portrait and asks if he knows
who it is of..and says its of my father, your grandpa..and you know why
I have kept it here..bcoz I do al my work here and it gives me
strength..then he shows prem another photo tht of veerji and lalit…prem
says thts your friend Balraj uncle right? Lalit says not my friend,
almost my father like, he gave me his years earning only bcoz of which
I could come to Canada..he then tells prem he wants something from
Prem..prem says you don’t have to ask anything, you tell me and it will
get done..Lalit says I want to tell you about the friendship, the
story, my beginning and the promise we made to you..the promise tht you
have to keep…both prem and lalit ji then look at the photo…


Veerji gives his and lalits photo with a
tabeez to Heer..and heer asks wht it is..Veerji says somethings become
fuzzy, to keep them alive are the photos…but there are some
thoughts..which if you don’t want to keep alive..then you should keep
them far away from sight..Heer keep these things far away from my sight
so tht I don’t have to see it and remember all tht…there in
Canada..Lalitji is telling the whole story to Prem…here Heer keeps the
photo and locket in a box…and as she closes and is abou to leave, her
dupatta gets caught in the box, she retrives it and finds the leaf on
which her and prems first wedding invitation was written by lalit and
balraj together…she looks at it..and Here Lalit ji asks if prem will be
able to keep his promise, if without looking at her, not knowing who
she is, if he will be able to keep his promise..if he will be able to
marry heer…and lalit hands prem the other invitation…..prem takes it
and looks at it, slightly smiling..here heer is looking at it and
touches it as well…Prem there says, I always believe God makes us in
pair..you are my God..and you have seen Heer and know her family..n I
believe you..I will marry heer…there Heer thinks papaji told me to keep
this in the box..may be he is right, we should keep things that hurt
away from us..and she has tears in her eyes..in Canada..Prem keeps
looking at the wedding invitation and smiles and the screen spilts into
two with prem and heer in two parts..and then..dadum dadum daum…balai
telefilms…epi ends…:-D
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:51 am

17th MARCH 08 (Monday)

sorry for the mistakes
Heer
is at the terrace and remembers her fathers words and then she says mom
saied that Prem mere kismat mein hai but today dad saied to leave that
rishta and then she remember her mother words about that baghwan jodi
ko bech ta hai and that your and prem rishta is already fixed. Se saied
that this ring is the truth her engagment ring and then suddenly
outside is aag and Heer is shocked and run downstair. Some one says to
balraj come outside all ..(i dont know what he says) jalrahie hai and
they are shocked. They all go outside and run to it they are again all
shocked and Veerji ki mouth is open http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley36.gif than Heers mother behosh hogaya and Heer shout babuji .

Veerji
runs to her and they show the next day everything is burned and they
are sad some one says Veerji ki kismat is not good first 20 yearsrs old
rihsta is broken and now all fasaal chalagaie becharie Heer ki kismat
bhi. Veerji says there is no need to say something about my daughter
Heer and veerji hug and kish desh mein hai mera dil tune is on

We
see Prem outside playing a instrument and then Preet comes and says
what have i heard we are going back to India(so preet is going to but
they had 3tickets didnt they??) and you have said yes for your marriage
are you crazy?? you are going to marry such a girl you dont know her
and even never met her. You always said na that there is a soulmate for
you and she is made just for u. Prem: yes i have always dreamed about a
girl that is made only for me a girl that if i see that i see the
future with her. then he says i know a lot of girls but i did knew it
jiski mujhe talaash hai that will be pehla and aghri ladki mere zindagi
mein.. then Preet says yes why can u wait aur do you think that you
wont find a soulmate then Prem says there will be some girl and look at
the moon and says the face i search for today in the moon that girl
will search me also in the moon jiske taqdier ne mere liye banayahai.
Preet say what about you dream thay you have so many years Prem says my
dreams are not so old as me. meine apne sapno ke itna sal nahi paya hai
ke ma and babuji ne mujhe pala hai and if they want that i marry that
girl than i am ready to fulfill them wish even if my wish will break
than Preet want so say some thing but prem say mujhe manzoor hai

Heer
prays mere babuji ko bacha lijye wai ghooro i have faith in you but
never do something that mere ma and babuji mere liye samchota karna
pare zindagi se i just want them happy a babuji comes and say you are
not looking happy but there will come some one he will love u he will
break sari rasme rewaj

Veerji
read womeme file and his wife ask him how are u everything is burned
nothing left for us and he say barosa everything will be ok. He say
balwand a uske pas jo paisa meine rakha diya tha i will take him and
then meher comes and say aap chachi ji ki paas jarahe hein mein bhi
chalo and he agrees

Veerji
adn meher ae in the bus adn they arrived in rajpur the driver say eat
something. Meher goes and want some food when she turns her back who
takragie hai us ladki ke saath joh Manmeet ki gf hai. She say you fool
cant you see and walk and meher says ohh angrezi dont talk to much
angrezi it is your fault adn they fight Veerji comes and come you al
ways fight.

They
are back in the bus. Meher sees manmeet in a car and says manmeet jiju
and then that girl comes and meher says that chural ke saath and says
pabuji jaldi aye they ride away Veerji says manmeet yaha kya karega she
says mein saach kehti hoon but he dont believe her.

They
are in Darjeets home and she say yeh kya hua woh bhi beti ki shaadi ke
pehle and than balwand says koy baat nahi ap ki chota bahie abhi bhi
zinda Veerji says about the money and he says yes i said na koi baath
nahi Meher Veerji says bolo na babuji kya hua tha and he says what
meher saw and Darjeet and Balwand are shocked. Darjeet says are u crazy
he lives here and what will he do in rajpur.

Manmeet
with his GF adn says yeh dekho and he shows Heers picture and she says
shakal se tho scha hai i hope she is not smart you know..Manmeet says
she is a girl from gau i know these girls yeh mere esharo par nachlege..
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18th MARCH 08 (Tuesday)

The epi starts with everone celebrating
baishaki, dancing and enjoying…At home, People are drying mangoes and
some woman say this year the produce has been good..teji says its all
the seasons, they give and they take..Heer comes there..Teji stops her
and tells her to call Manmeet and cofirm that he is coming in the
evening…Heer hesitates..Teji tells her she does not know how to use the
phone and all thus heer needs to do it..Heer agrees and leaves..

A girl is leaving in a hurry..her mom, working
in the yard with teji stops her and asks where she is running? The girl
says its her friends Bday today and she needs to go else her friend
will be ver upset with her, her mom asks as to why? The girl says since
her Bday comes once in 4 years…her mom is all confused..the girl
explains tht her friend was born on the 29th of Feb…Teji listens to
this and stops what she was doing..and remembers the date when she and
gayatri had taken heer and prem to a dargah and ask the peer to say
something about the future of the kids…the baba says the kids look like
they are made for each other….the baba also says, the fourth time they
will meet again…the 16 years from now, when they will meet again….Teji
says people say what I say always comes true, I put my words on
yours..tht 16 years from now when they meet, we will get them
married…the baba leaves and teji and Gayatri keep looking…


In Canada…Prem comes down and Gayatri tells
him to call India and inform Mr.Mehta that they are coming to India and
to send for a car…Prem dials the number..at the same time..Heer is also
dialing some number , I think Manmeet’s….they get into a cross
connection..and heer says hello….Prem says Hello…who is this? Heer says
this is me..Mom told me to call you…prem is all confused…Heer continues
her monologue (I hated her dialogue delivery
here..its like she is reading from a shopping list , no emotions, no
feelings, no expressions..arrgh!!)
and says ma babaji were
asking for you..and asks Prem how he is and how his parents are, Prem
says they are all good..he tries to interrupt but Heer continues..and
says I wanted to confirm that you are coming tonight for the fest, else
Ma babaji will be very disappointed…Prem tries to tell her tht she is
mistaken..heer says Ma told her tht pairs are made in heaven (girl! How is tht even remotely related to your current conversation???),
and that God some how makes the connection…you know right, my relation
was to happen with someone else, but now its with you..Ma baba are a
lil worried..if you come, they will be reassured….Prem listens…and says
your parents are right…I believe them too…but the thing is I have never
met you..Heer is confused..Prem says, this is a cross connection and I
am not your Fiance…heer says, Oh okay, I will keep the phone now and
you please don’t call on this number ever again..she hangs up…Heer
keeps looking out of the window….Prem smiles…Gayatri asks why he is
smiling…Prem says it was someone from a cross connection..but her life
is also like mine….she was to get married to someone else and now its
with someone else….Heer in her room is standing..teji asks if she spoke
to him..Heer says no..it was a wrong number..teji asks how come she
spoke to a wrong number for so long…Heer says she didn’t know and even
he didn’t say anything..but she felt tht those few minutes they had
formed a reltionship…Teji tells her to come out and meet her Baba..he
is back…Prem and Heer are lost in thoughts..Prem though..looks
amazingly romantic and keeps smiling to himself (*Sigh*!!!! Haye mein marr jawa!!!)



Everyone is running aournd..Teji thnks..why
Veerji isn’t here yet…some work men come and talk to Teji about advance
money for the work they are doing.Teji says Veerji has gone to Ludhiana
to get the money and they will get paid the moment he comes back..they
all leave..Teji goes back to sad…


Everyone is dancing for vaishakhi and the
marriage celebration…at the same time in Canada..the trio brothers are
at a lounge with disco music and all..preet and harmeet seem to enjoy,
but not Prem…Heer is sad Teji comes and asks whats wrong? Heer says she
is feeling bad that everyone is enjoying the vaishakhi but they cant as
their produce got burnt..Teji reassures her that the rituals are just a
part of life..what is important is that next year the same time…she
(Heer) will be married and setteled and everything will be alright..she
further reassures Heer…Heer is convinced..and Teji tells Heer not to
worry and jut prepare for the marriage..Heer leaves…Teji looks on
worried….


In canada, Preet is dancing in the night
club..Prem looks on…Harmeet is talking to some people…Prem then sees
Preet yapping…Preet comes to talk to some guy…Preet asks his friend
hows India? Since he was there recently…how are the girls? His friend
says, the same, ghunghat and ghagra choli types (tu
mil mujhe, mein dikhati huin tujhe ghaghara choli types kaisi hoti
hai!! Belan hoti na mere paas to ab tak tera sar phod chuki hoti!! Why
does ekta wanna show tht ghaghra choli or ghoonghta clad Indian woman
is a bad thing??? Wht nonsense! )
Preet shamlessly asks his friends, whats underneath the dresses in these woman?(Haawww!! Besharam!!! Tauba tauba!! LOL)
His friend is confused and asks him what does he mean by tht..Preet
again reiterates his qestion..and then laughs and clarifies as to if
the women are beautiful or not and they both laugh….he notices Prem and
goes to him..and asks as to why he is not enjoying since there are so
many young girls around (yeah, like he cares! He is thinking of me you moron! hehe) why
isn’t he dancing with them..they all want to dance with him..he further
tells Prem tht if he dances with them, then those girls would want to
eventually dance with him (Preet)as well…he tells you ae gonna get
married now..to some girl…Prem looks at him sternly…yeah its dad’s
choice..so must be unique…you remember the car dad bought..the whole of
Canada knew about it…Mom also must be Dad;s choice (dude! Is tht a compliment or an insult to your mom???) Preet
goes on to say God knows how tht girl would be tht Dad selected for
you, this is our last night here..come on lets enjoy and Preet drags
Prem into the dance floor…Both Prem and Heer and caught inbetween other
ppl dancing and seem disinterested….and then Prem leaves the dance
floor…Heer does too…


Veerji and Meher come…Teji tells Meher to go
in..Veerji also leaves…teji tries to stop him, but Veerji keeps going
in…He says hello to the guests and goes to his room…in his room..he
sits and thinks how is he gonna say it to Teji, her heart will break,
heer’s engagement will break..how will he tell the truth to all..he is
worried…..

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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:52 am

24th MARCH 08 (Monday)

Veerji stands up and his wife says that there
was happening so much but u didnt tell me and you acted like u are very
happy. Veerji says not to hard because he don't want that the children
hears it. She ask how it happens and Veerji remembers his brother and
he says apka sara paysa dhoopgaya. In wich compony the money was that
company is faiiet. After that Veerji says how much we get tu rakdena
and his brothers says mujhe maaf karo.

His wife goes outside there are people waiting
for them money but she says paiso ke intezam nahi hua par hojayega,
dont stop working. They says how can this happen tomorrow is the
wedding and you have to do so much and ap ki beti ke rishta pehle se bi
toot choka hai aisa na hojaye is bar bi tootjaye she is looking very
shocked. And then they say if you cant give the money say it clearly
the preparations of the wedding will not be begin tomorrow. And they
go. She goes to Veerji and act like everything is ok and Heer is
listenig outside adn she remembers daljeet chachi ki words about beti
ki shaadi hai sab koch dega and after that what that people said to her
mom.

Heer is crying and they show Prem playing his
instrument and he heras someone crying and then he stops playing adn he
has tears in his eyes and then preet comes and ask are you crying and
he makes jokes Prem says i have played this tune so many times but this
time it feels like someones tears come in my eyes adn he says aia
laga..waisa..laaga like someone is here. Preet says no crying we are
going tomowrrow back this is the last night here

Meher and Heer comes to their parents room and they have sweet moment.
Manmeet is breakfasting and his mom says i
said to you that everything is good in your kismat and now everything
will be ok and he says ji ma. you are getting married soon and
tayarieya bhi shooroe hogahie hai. After that se says mujhe lagha woh
jaleejuli sab khel beghardiya tha and what if she sayd that she dont
want to marry and shaadi roki hogahie to Manmeet stands up very angry
and grabs his mom by her neck and says what did i say to youHe says i
am going inside dont disturb me and he is acting very very weird.(he is a psycho)

Some people comes again to prepare the wedding
and sayd dont worry you gave the money the rest you can give later ghar
ki baat hein Veerji says i didnt send the money

Heers mom talks with her about her marriage
and after that. Veerji comes and says yeh humara pyaar ki nishani thi
(a necklace) and you give this to them. yeh humari pehli pyaar ki
nishani thi uski kone ke baat agheri yaad thi (they are talking about
their son)She says yeh necklace humari beti ke thi jo hum staion par
kodiya tha adn if he was here than he would give not the chain but sab
kuch bhi dediya tha. Veerji says i will do something to get all the
money for the marriage adnd how that is gonna happen i have thinked
about that to.

A very boring episode!
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25th MARCH 08 (Tuesday)

The epi begins with Veerji storming out to the
fields…he goes to his field and reads the board saying this land is not
for sale and then he erases it…Teji comes running and asks him to
stop…and asks him since he considered the land as his mother, then how
is he able to sell her…he says I know I had told that, but even my kids
are her kids and I am sure she would want that too..Veerji starts to
erase the board and Teji says…please don’t do this..Veerji says, for my
child’s marriage, I am selling my mother..God please forgive me..Heer
and Meher are in tears…Veerji turns back to see them..both the
daughters come running to Veerji…and the whole family is in
tears….Veerji thinks I will mortgage the land and then do Heer’s
marriage…



All the preps for the marriage are going
on…Veerji asks for lassi…Teji brings it…and Veerji says, I wil bring a
nice suit for you Teji, Teji says I don’t need any new dresses, I have
an old one I will wear that…and asks him to bring himself a coat…and
veerji says Ok, then he will bring a suit for the moti, looking at
Meher…Then Veerji leaves for the court…and Heer corrects him and says,
you should say, I am going n coming…not I am going…Veejri smiles and
goes…


Heer and Meher are breaking a piggie bank and
they discuss if they can buy dresses for Ma Babuji…and they hope that
they can get it…and then Meher complains how she is never in the video
and she keeps asking all the video ppl but they deny it saying that I
will take the whole screen…they share a laughing moment..and Meher gets
sad thinking in this wedding they wont be able to have any video
grapher..both of them have a sad moment…Tei listens to all this…and is
tearful….


Veerji is at the court and gets frustrated seeing
the long line and thinks how can he sell his mother land like
this….meanwhile Teji is sad thinking how her daughters are subduing
their hopes for the troube they are facing..she is standing before a
photo studio and goes in and asks if they do marriage videos etc..the
guy says…yes they do. A lil boy brings tea and Teji asks for
water..they point to a pot and Teji is about to drink the water when
she notices Manmeet marriage photo and asks when did the marriage
happen n who the guy is…Teji si shell shocked…the guy in the shop says
he does not remember the name but the marriage was held in
ludhiana…teji asks if she could get a copy of it..the guy gets her one
and tei runs out of the office crazily crying and thinks she needs to
tell Sardarji and meanwhile Veerji is waiting in line and its lunch
break in the court and the lawyer goes on break..teji takes the bus,
also Heer n Meher are looking for dresses to buy for Veerji and
Teji…meher n Heer decide on a suit for Teji and while buying Meher
embarrasses Heer by saying loudly tht the dresses are for her
marriage..Heer scolds her..and they both go through the field…and meher
teases heer more..meanwhile teji is anxious to reach the court on time
and thinks she will not let heers life get spoiled…veerji there is
waiting in the line..meher and heer play in the field…Teji gets down
from the bus and the lawyer is just about to stamp the papers..Teji
turns and shouts and tells him to stop…Veerji turns to see Teji n is
shocked…teji comes to him Veerji asks what happened..Teji shows veerji
the photo and veerji is shocked….and then thinks of the time when he n
meher had seen manmeet from the bus…veerji gets angry…and tells he will
not leave manmeet and his family..Teji tells they should go…Veerji
says, now I will say no infront of the whole biradari….and now they
will know…and they say even balwant and daljeet must be sad…and they
run home..


At home Daljeet, Balwant and Manmeet are
scheming..and says our plan is good for Manmeet…balwant says once
veerji comes to know he will bury me alive….daljeet..so why don’t you
get buried…in gold…and then Daljeet says, manmeet you get married..I
mean you get what you want, we will get what we want…Balwant says you
talk too much, first see and then talk and right then Veerji comes in
gets one tight slap to Balwant..Daljeet is shocked..Balwant is shocked
as well..Teji and Veerji look on angrily..Veerji says..you did such a
big betrayal to your own people??? Daljeet look scared….
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:53 am

26th MARCH 08 (Wednesday)

The epi starts with Veerji slapping Balwant
and daljeet comes to stop and Veerji tells him to shut up..Veerji says,
you, I brought you up, fed you, took care of you and you dissed your
own family?? He slaps balwant again…he says what do you have against my
daughters..that you want my land for their happiness..how could
you…Veerji in anger kicks Balwant who is in tears and scared..Dal tries
to stop him…Teji tries to stop him..and tells what has happened has
happened..from now on Balwant is dead for us..Veeji spits on Bawant and
he leaves in anger…Daljeet is in tears…Teji asks how could she do this
to her..she too is a mom and how can she make herself so hard to hurt
her children….Daljeet is speechless…Teji says you both are dead for us
from now..and they leave…

Veerji and Teji are sitting in the bus and the
conductor says it’s a famous place for dhabba and asks everyone to get
down and eat…Teji says she will go call the daughters…while Veerji is
washing his hands he listens to the talk of lalit, in a news and he
gets angry listening to the first part, as Veerji is about to break the
TV, the dhaba owner stops him in time and Veerji listens to the rest of
Lalits talk and how lalit wants to come back to India for his friend
balwant..etc..Veerji is touched and happy..he feels bad for having
doubted Lalit..he happily runs to Teji and tells her that lalit is
returning with his family..they both are very happy…and he will get
prem married to heer..and veerji tells teji how lalit hasn’t changed
atall…and they are very happy..veerji sees a lil boy and says he will
give him sweets and tells him to come to the bus where he has kept his
wallet…the lil boy gets him money for sweets and leaves..the bus starts
its way….in a turn, a lady drops her load and a motorcycle trying to
avaoid her sveres and comes infront of the bus..and the bus trying to
avoid sveres and hangs from a cliff…coming to a halt..

There heer is worried why ma-babuji haven’t come
yet..both meher and heer are worried..they hear a knock and run to the
door..a hawaldar is standing there..heer opens the door and the man
says near ludhiana, near a dhaba there has been an accident…but you
don’t worry, they both are ok..heer and meher go out but are
shocked…meanwhile the bus is hanging on precariously on the
cliff…everyone in the bus is anxious and try to balance the bus…which
is swingingly dangerously now…the driver manages to get out and one by
one the passangers fall out…the two people in heers house is
different…and they say these two girls are not their daughter…and say
they were looking for their daughter…heer asks the hawaldar where their
parents are…meanwhile in the bus almost everyone has gotten down..only
tei and veerji are left…veerji goes in the back of the bus, to balance
it…a guy comes to help them..veerji and teji are trying to get out of
the bus..they hold hands and try to come out of the bus…the guys in
holding teji’s hand and she is holding veerji’s hand….and teji blesses
the guy helping…Heer comes enquiring about the accident to a man and he
tells her not to worry….meanwhile the bus swings suddenly and teji’s
hand slips off veerji..and veerji falls..and he begs her to go..teji
says she wont…teji tells the guy helping to tell her kids in ambala
that they should not worry…she tells him to tell them about lalit..the
guy is hell bent on saving them…veerji is not able tcome…teji then
pushes the guy out not wanting to leave veerji alone (what eternal love…brought tears to my eyes….pya ho to aisa..rishta ho to aisa..jeena saath arna saath…) Heer
and Meher go to a peer baba..where they are all praying..meanwhile teji
and veerji are struggling…veerji begs teji to go…as the kids will
become orphans otherwise…and even lalit is coming…he begs teji to
leave..she doesn’t…she goes and sits beside veerji..meanwhile heer and
meher are in the holy place…veerji thinks of lalit to take care of his
kids.. (what are the other doing standing n looking on..morons go help them!!!)
heer prays to God that where ever our Ma-babaji are, keep them
safe..the bus falls off..lalit is in flight..and heer is tying the
sacred thread….in the morgue (now I am so crying…)
the guy who helped them asks the hawaldar to give him the body as
before death they conveyed to him messages for his daughters and they
take him to the morgue….


Lalit in suit-booth touches the ground thinks..my
country is calling me..and I will go back to my country….my country’s
mud…and thinks Balraaj, I kept my word..i came back..to my country and
to you…the screen splits into three parts..heer and meher in one, lalit
in the other and teji-veerji’s body on the top….
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:54 am

27th MARCH 08 (Thursday)
The epi begins with lalit explaining to his
family how he feels about returning back home..Preet us least
interested…and Gayatri and Prem look contented…Lalit goes on to say
from now on he will pray to Sun God everyday like he used to before..I
have kept my promise and returned back home…he tells his kids, that
whether you get here anything or not, you will get a lot of love and
affection..and lalit talks of Balraj and gayatri says yeah lets go to
ambala now…I want to eat the food prepapred by Parjaiji ..Harman says
we will eat there food ony if we go there right now..they all decide to
leave…(too much dialogue, I cut it to the main ones..)


Meanwhile Daljeet and Balwant are in the market
talking what will veerji do now etc, daljeet asks why don’t you eat
some mooli, you will become more stronger…Balwant chides her for joking
in a serious issue…they then notice heer and meher come towards them,
daljeet curses them and both run to the daughters..heer is hysterical
and tells balwant how she came to know of the accident near ambala
balwant gets scared and seeing the girls so anxious he gives them so
money…daljeet sees the money and snatches it from heer and tells its
not good to give so much money to young girls…she then splits the
amount to smaller amounts and gives it to them..both heer and meher
look on…balwant tells them to rush to ambala….


Meanwhile Lalit and family stops near a dhabba , Prem gets out (hawww my ctuies look so so sizzling hot!!!)and
Harman sees a huge stretch of land tells he has a business idea, if
they can buy the land and make a huge resturant here..lalit says land
here is only for producing food not for anything else..then Harman says
ok then why don’t we start a food business…Preet jokes at him and they
all smile…Lalit looks at a nearby dhaba and says its one of the most
wel known..then they see two arthi’s going..lalit sees this and tells
Prem that when a funeral passes by they fold their hands and pray so
that the dead are closer to the after life….the people with the bodies
carry them beside lalit n his family…as the first one crosses…the dead
body slightly hits lalit’s folded arms (scary!!! I would have freaked out) and then he feels de-javu..he suddenly remembers all the good times with Balraj….and feels weird…


Lalit looks after the bodies have gone..gayatri
asks what he is looking at…Lalit says death and life are in Gods hand
and I hope their souls rest in peace…also I am thankful to God that I
am alive so that I can see my friend with my own eyes….meanwhile the
helpful guy brings the body to their home and people come and sit by
the bodies…Heer and Meher come down the bus and they rush through the
field talking about Teji and veerji…the guy is sitting in the hall and
says I have to wait for their daughters, I have some news to give to
them….heer and meher are walking…the guy gets up prays and leaves….and
in the field bumps into the girls and he drops a coin…meher picks up
the coin and tells him to toss it to see if papaji will scold them or
not..the toss truns out to be tails and they are al happy..the guy
gives them the coin and says they should keep it as its their lucky
coin and leaves….


Heer and Meher reach home…and find many people
there..meher says somany ppl are here and we have just come, ma must be
doing all the work and now I will get blasted…they look at the people
standing and eerily go into their house….people keep looking at
them…both of them look at the people standing and feel anxious..then
heer notices the two bodies….and asks a lady crying…who they are…asks
again and again..the lady is crying hysterically…meher understands and
puts her hand on heer…heer keeps asking again…heer calls out for Ma and
Babuji…and asks why everyone is crying…she keeps shouting for them to
come..meher is crying..heer gets hysterical….she begs ma and babuji to
come out…suddenly teji and eerjis cover shift and both meher and veerji
see their dead bodies….Heer moves closer slowly…meher goes to teji and
cries…and begs her to wake up..heer sits by veerji and calls out
repeatedly papaji wake up…both the daughters cry their lungs out and
call them to wake up (Very very well shot and acted scene…made me cry..)heer tries to keep waking up veerji and tells him to scold her..and talk to her…both of them cry…..(I couldn’t write more of their pain…tooo painful… http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley19.gifhttp://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley19.gifhttp://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley19.gifhttp://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley19.gif ..)


Lalit is sitting in the dhaba and says he has
come back to his country after full 14 years….theres news going on they
say that a bus to ambala has met with an accident and among other
victims are Balraj Maan and teji Maan…Lalit hears this news and is
shell shocked..so are the others in the family….
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:54 am

31st MARCH 08 (Monday)

The
episode starts on Lalit’s face, he says how can Balraj-Teji meet with
an accident,Prem’s mom consoles him by saying he should not worry and
they will reach Ambala in a few hours.Balraj and Teji’s bodies are to
be burnt when the Pandit ji asks who will cremate the bodies to which a
person says that according to the rituals the eldest son is suppose to
do this,Heer says says that she and Meher were everything for their
parent just like they were everything for both of them and their
relation was not bound by any rituals so she will cremate the
bodies,she cries and in the next scene Prem and Preet are in the car
where Preet is driving,Prem suddenly feels something which Preet
notices and asks what keeps happening to him.Prem says that he feels
like the stars,the wind are trying to say something to him and his
coming to India is not a coincidence but “someone” has written this and
that someone is destiny.Preet jokingly says that this is not destiny,
this is philosophy.Prem says that he has a feeling that someone close
to him is sad and crying but it is not so because everyone around him
is happy.


Balwant
tells Daljeet that they should have gone to Ambala,what will the people
think about them and also Heer and Meher are all alone there to which
Daljeet replies that people will talk about them later but before that
they will ask Balwant to re-pay the loans that Balraj had taken for
Heer’s marriage. Just then the phone rings and Daljeet picks it up,its
Lalit on the phone,he says that he heard that Balraj and Teji met with
an accident and Daljeet is shocked to hear this and pretends to be the
maid and says no body his home,and then says that she cannot hear
Lalit’s voice and disconnects the phone.She asks Balwant to bring Heer
and Meher to their house before Lalit meets them,Balwant is confused
and says that just now she refused and now she’s asking him to bring
them here.She says Lalit has 3 sons and she has 3 daughters,she won’t
let Heer get married to Prem instead all her 3 daughters will get
married to Lalit’s sons.After Balwant leaves Daljeet says that Heer
wont get her Prem not in this birth atleast.Balwant reaches Heer’s
house but doesn’t find her or Meher there,he calls Daljeet and says
that they are not at home and maybe Lalit came there before him and
took Heer and Meher with him, before he could continue he feels
someone’s hand on his shoulder and is shocked to see Lalit.


He
asks Daljeet to hold on and and when Lalit asks him about Balraj he
tells him that he died,Lalit gets flashback of the times he spent with
Balraj including the scene where he gave Balraj PH’s first wedding card
and also when they were at the railway station and Balraj gave him
money.Lalit then asks Balwant about Teji,Heer and Meher……Balwant asks
him to wait and talks to Daljeet and she says to tell Lalit that they
also died with Balraj.Heer pays all the loan by selling their
house,they man whom she re-payed the loan gives her the remaining money
when his wife comes and gives her some money from their side but Heer
refuses to take it,and they leave.Meher asks Heer that where will they
go now and Heer says to chachi’s house..and Meher tells her that she
wants to go to their house for the last time…and they go there,Lalit
and Balwant are still inside the house,Heer and Meher reach there and
Meher is about to open the door but stops saying that its not their
house anymore so she wont go inside.Lalit hears someone calling out the
name Heer and is about to go outside but Balwant stops him saying that
their neighbour’s daughter is also Heer.He advises Lalit to go back to
his house in Ludhiana on which he has spent so much money,but Lalit
says its of no use because he built that house for Balraj and now he is
no more.Outside,Heer and Meher are leaving, they remember all the times
they spent with their parents and cry.Next we see Heer and Meher
walking on the road and Lalit’s car stops by them and the driver asks
Heer something.Lalit doesn’t see her but Heer sees Lalit’s face in the
mirror.
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:54 am

1st APRIL 08 (Tuesday)

The epi begins with heer and meher walking on
the road and lalits car crosses them, there car stops and the driver
asks them for some direction...lalit n gayatri dont see heer...when
heer is done giving direction, lalit gets a call and says yeh prem, and
right then heer leaves the car...prem feels something i guess...Heer
and meher come to the same peer baba's dargah...n remembers old times
with teji n veerji..and the whole incident before the accident...she
looks at the thread she had tied and the baba comes out towards
them....heer and meher come face to face with him..heer says we met you
at the dargah when we were praying for our parents..the baba asks why
they are so sad..heer says we went to the dargah to ask but then lord
took our parents away..baba says, what ever happens happens with Gods
wish...dont worry..when he takes something, he gives something back too
, one that is there in your fate...meanwhile Prem n family reach the
station...

Lalit is standing in tears and
complains to gayatri how all this happened...gayatri is tearful..lalit
says how will i tell prem...i myself am not convinced...for some
starnge reason...heer and meher are in the station as well...some
mawali's tease heer...she is nervous...the guys whistle at her...heer
comes to get ticket for ludhiana..when the guys surrond her..Prem sees
this..the ticket counter guy says the counter is closed she should go
for the next one...when she turns..the guys are looking at her like
ugly hungry pervert vultures (I could think of many more words..would have had to rate the update PG13!!morons!)Heer
keeps looking down and walks off..the guys follows her...she goes to
the out counter..and asks for two tickets to ludhiana...the guy asks
for moneyquickly as they r the last remaining tickets..the guys follow
her..then comes our hero prem..and stands behind heer..his arms out
stretched like creating a protecting shield around heer...(trust
me, its the wierdest thing i have ever seen any hero ever
do..Lord..whts wrong with the creatives? mana they are creatives..do
they have to be so over the top creative like this?? its not even
romantic..its hysterically funny n ridiculous...WTH!!)

anyways..heers sees this..and as she turns to see who is "protecting
her" prem maharaj turns to glare at the gundas, who suddenly have
become meek spectators...Heer on the other hand cant take her eyes off
Prem (I know sweety..join our league!)
again..right when prem turns to outstretch his arms and protect heer,
heer turns, thus not seeing his face...prem then turns and leaves and
THEN heer turns to see who he was (oh lord..so many turns, mere gardan pe moch agaya..moov anyone??LOL) anyways..there goes prem...(WTH, she wont even ask who he is?? take help and not even stop him?)


Prem comes to the family and tells them the
tickets to ludhiana are over..the family suggests they should go by
taxi..gayatri tells them to come in a taxi and she n lalit will leave
now...they agree..Preet and harman are frustrated with the place (already??)
harman complains... tht the weather is hot..preet says tht is wht is
not hot..harman says wht do you mean? preet says i mean hot girls..i
cant see any hot girls..everything is cold..thanda..harman asks for
water and wonders if there is mineral water anywhere...preet laughs and
shows him a water fountain...Prem maharaj comes and hit harman
slightly..then goes to drink water..while he is done drinking..Heer
passes him and her oddly 5 meter long dupatta covers prems face (take it off!! my poor baby will suffocate)
everything stops to a standstill, becomes black n white..heer is
standing holding her dupatta...prem is standing mesmerized in the
dupatta...a trolley full of boxes comes inbetween them and pulls the
dupatta off prems face (Thanks GOD!! that is the corniest scene so far...) heer gathers her dupatta and both of them walk off...

Heer and meher settle down in the train...in the train..they stick an
address label on the bag..meher asks why..heer says..teji always used
to tell them to be careful while travelling..no one knows what might
happen...they both settle down..meher says..its good that in the
remaining 10000 we got the last remaining nishani of ma babaji and
meher puts the chain on her palm, sitting by the window..and they keep
talking about how teji told them to take care of everything while
travelling..even if one looses a small thing, it hurts.....a strange
looking man sees the golden chain and snatches it from mehers hand and
runs.....meher and heer run behind him...shouting chor chor...the guy
is hitting n falling finally meher catchhes upto him and misses
him....they keep following him...he tries to jump from a gate..meher
comes by and holds him in a choke hold, trying to get the chain...he
bites her (DOG, quick wash your hand..you might get rabbies!!) and
what veerji had told abt the chain comes to mehers mind...flashback of
the scenes...and meher is wailing in pain...heer comes and fights with
him...somethign falls off in the fight..its the chain..heer tells meher
to stop...they pick it up and hug...right then the train sounds to take
off..they run to the train..the train just takes off...(LOL
badly shot scene..it is so obvious..they r like jogging in the
place...and the train is just moving in the background..LOL you girls
should watch Jab we met!!)
anyways, both the sisters are tearful and meher cries and wonders what they will do now, that the train is gone...
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:55 am

2nd APRIL 08 (Wednesday)

The epi starts with both the sisters looking
at a chart with trains to leave…and heer says she cant understand
anything (haaw unpad??) she asks a man when the next train to ludhiana
is, he says, late night…both the sisters are flustered…


Balwant comes calling to daljeet, dal brings him
pani or something.balwant is furious and asks what exactly her plans
are…why she is doing what she is doing..Daljeet seeing him angry thinks
her grip on him is slipping, she needs to do something…she explains to
balwant tht the money lalit had sent from Canada to make veerjis house,
which we never told veerji, if we get our daughters married to his
sons, then from care taker we will become owners…Balwant says what will
happen to heer n meher…daljeet with as much venom as possible says, If
they have gone somewhere, I hope they don’t come back, if they come
back, I will turn their keys like a doll and shut their mouth for
ever…feed them may be and make them do work…we will tell lalitji that
they are servants..balwant says, ok, but have you made any preparations
for their arrival…right then aslesha walks down th stairs..dressed in a
red salwar…and daljeet looks on proudly…


The lalit family comes to a temple and bebe
reminds lalit of the temple that they used to come here regularly when
balraj was alive..the whole family goes in..lalit thinks prem n biji
don’t even know yet that balraj n their whole family died….lalit
remembers his time with balraj and walks into the temple…prem and
everyone take arti and pray…biji says she wants to do pooja for my
son’s friend balraj and his wife teji, gayatri is in tears and biji
says for my grandson prem and his would be wife Heer, so that their
relationship remains forever…pujari ji calls for prem gayatri n lalit
are in tears ..lalit remembers the wedding card time..prem goes ahead
for the pooja…lalit remembers the time when he told to prem about
heer….lalit remembers balwants word about the accident..prem is about
to do the pooja, lalit comes and throws the pooja thali off in
anger…everyone is shocked….biji asks why he did this…lalit says we
don’t put water and flower on dead people…everyone is shocked…prem is
emotionless..lalit breaks down….so does gayatri..prem (looking
adorable….) is in heers thoughts….


Heer n meher are in the station, meher falls
asleep on heer..heer wakes her up saying its time for train n they
decide to go talk to the TT…heer while getting up…limps…meher asks wht
happened…she makes heer sit and looks at her feet..she asks what
happened n how come its bleeding..heer says its nothing..heer asks
meher if she is hungry…they see a tt and ask him if there is any seat
left..he says he would go n see..suddenly he comes out..the train is
already in the station and people are running around to get a
seat..heer n meher ask if there is any seat left..the tt says one is
there and asks them for 300 rupees, they say they don’t have and the TT
chides them…somehow in the rush n push heer manages to get in the
train..meher is trying to get in and runs with the train..finally heer
manages to pull meher up..they hug and the train leaves…



Lalit is sitting in the house with balwant n
all…they all look at each other..sitting sad…balwant comes with a
letter and gives it to lalit…daljeet looks a lil perturbed…balwant
looks like daljeet who smirks…meanwhile heer and meher reach ludhiana
and the tt asks them for ticket..when they say they don’t have..he
tries to misbehave with them..meher rebukes him and he tries to call a
constable to catch them , while they run away….they reach the
house..here lalit reads the letter..its obvious tht the letter is
written by Daljeet..the letter says tht veerji waited to marry heer to
prem, but when they didn’t hear of him, they fixed the marriage
elsewhere…he also says tht he considers balwant as his own son n his
daughters are like his too..so rest is upto lalit to decide..aslesha
looks a lil shocked…Daljeet smirks…prem n gayatri are sad…here heer and
meher walk into the house..daljeet sees them and curses tht how come
these two unwanted came at such an auspicious moment n tries to think
of a way ..the episode ends on her
shocked face….
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:55 am

3rd APRIL 08 (Thursday)

heer/maher comes to house bt dt policeman comes dr and grabes them
to police station.lalit reads latter. and at the end as written in dt
latter he says dt balwant wanted him to get his son marry wd daljeet's
daughter. actually dt letter is not written by balwant. daljeet wrote
dt all for jst paiso ki bhukh keliye.http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley7.gif
so lalit dn decides to do d same.prem is playing ham rahe na rahe.and
heer can listen dt frm her soul though she is at police station.lalit
comes and asks prem dt u have to tk decision dt now cn u marry daljeet'
daughter? and dn other side dt policeman is trying to throw them in the
prision. bt heer asks him to make a call. daljeet pics up the call and
dn though she can listen to them all her dramebazi dt who r u i cn't
hear.http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley19.gif bechari heer. and dn cuts the phone. dn dt policeman was abt to throw them in the prision.


bt dn d main officer(ramola sikand who's doing same role in kyunki ds
days) enters and ask dt policeman to leave them. and they r free.http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley1.gif
while they were walking to their chacha' house otherside prem is
playing ham rahe na rahe again. bt he is hurted and in dt his music
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they goes to their chacha's home no1 opens d door for them thought they rings d bell and knocks so many times.

then suddenly lalit feels bad while sleeping. he wakes up and says his
wife dt i m going out in fresh air. an dn he sees frm d door dt
2gls?(heer/mehar) hiding under some cart to save themselves frm rain.
so he opens d door and starts shouting who is dr? achanak dt idiot
daljeet comes and she saw them. so says dt dr is no1 i cn't see any1.

bt dn mehar saw them. and they get up frm dr as she said heer dt dr is
sm1 at chahi's house. heer shouts back dt chahi me heer. at dt time
lalit is also dr. and episode ends.

(i dont kno wether lalit heard them or not.
hope dt lalit heard her name heer.god saves those 2. actually he can
hear them. bt ds is ekta so can't say anythng how long she'll take to
show us heer and prem together.)
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:44 pm

7th APRIL 08 (Monday)

it begins with the last scenee..
Lalit goes outside and walks towards Heer and Meher and in mean
timethey show scenes between Lalit and Veerji. When he reach heer and
meher he say HEER? and Daljeet think oh no sari mehnat mein pani gher
gayaa adn thinks what should i doo.. and run towards Heer adn meher adn
says you 2 bata to detie ke arahie hoon and says lalit this girls are
from my gau and her name is Heer too. He ask and what is her namee (he
means Meher) Daljeet think what should i say and say Rano hai. She says
yeh anat hai they lost their parents when they were young and they go
inside and Heer and Lalit look at eachother

Daljeet takes Heer and Meher to a room and say now you will stay
here adn apna kamra samajlo adn says kitne bheeg gaye tum donoo. I will
take clothes for you and close the door. Heer adn Meher screams darwaza
kholyejii chachiji.

Lalit sits on a chair and thinks oh Heer and think at the news they
didnt talk about that the daughters of Veerji that they died only about
him and his wife and thinks why daljeet brought them so soon to them
room. balraj ki bi 2 betiyaan thi and they dont have parents and they
too. itne sare etefaaq ek saath? adn go out side the room. He sees
balwant at the stairs adn says Heer agahie hai with her sister and
Daljeet is there too. Balwant is shocked and say woh Here daljeet woh
this is what i wanted to say at that moment Daljeet comes and says what
will he say everytime of some one comes from my maayka he is like that.
adn says tension mat lo they wont stay more than a couple days. Lalit
walks away adn Daljeet scolds Balwand. Daljeet says Heer ranje na us
yoogh mein hogaya tha and this time i wont let it happen too.

Meher ask to Heer kyun mom hame chor kar chala gayie. Heer says ma
is with us close your eyes and you will see her. and they close their
eyes and the mom comes. adn they open their eyes the mom is gone. Meher
says when i closed my eyes i feeled mom but now you aer my mother you
are my everything dii

Prem stays at the balcon and says zindagi ne mujhe aise raaste pe
laya hai ke waha se 2 rasete hai ek taraf fathers happiness my familys
happinees and the ther way woh pyaar jo abhi bhi mere dil mein hai ek
intezaar mein. dont know what will happen next. But my heart says there
is some one made for me. Dad says to marry some one that i dont know
maybe his happiness is my happiness to phir yeh bechani kyun why it
look likes i have the choose one i dont know what to do dil se sono ya
dimaq si. He takes his sur adn plays but then one tar breaks. And
says ohh ya kal gera thi us nichie kamre mein adn goes to Heer and
Meher room it is dark they bump in to eachother and they look at
eachother and the songs tum is pal yahaan plays. Prem says sorry it was
dark so i couldnt see something. Something fall adn heer grabs it Prem
wants to grab it too but grabs Heers hands. Prems mom says Prem and
Prem says yaha hoon mein maa adn Heer looks shocked ans say prem?? And
she remembers her motherrs word that baghwan insano ko joriyo mein
bechtahai adn he has send Prem for you adn it ends on her shocked face

Great episode do watch itt loved Heer and prem the way they were looking at eachother
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:44 pm

8th APRIL 08 (Tuesday)

The epi starts with heer and prem walking to
each other and heer realises tht he is prem, by the time prem turns to
look, heer had left...his mom comes...daljeet comes too, seeing prem
exasperated, his mom asks what is it? prem says he saw a girl
here...daljeet is shocked..and says it must be my daughter
Aslesha...she has a habit of drinking milk at night
(yeah like mom like daughter...cats!) and she tells prem to go and they leave....daljeet curses under her breath...


Prem comes to meet his dad and says
dad, I have something to say, lalit asks what is it and stands up..prem
says i have finally decided, my decision will be what ever yours
is...may be its my fate i dont get to meet the girl whom I will marry,
may be its fate i will see her after marriage..but you are right and I
will do what you say..Lalit says he is proud of him and they hug..prem
though looks sad (aww my baby..here me coming with kleenex )


Aslesha and Dj are in a room, ashlesha says i
am gonna go meet prem..which room is he in, Dj biting her teeth says
upstairs..as Ash goes to leave..Dj holds her hand and says, these are
NRI ppl, desi chals wont work, you will need to use your videsi chaals
and Ash smirks...


Preet is sitting and playing video game..Ash comes and says, Hi I'm Ash, Preet says, Hi I'm Abhi (LMAO!! serves her right!)
Ash sees he is playing games, keeps the tray in her hand and jumps to
his side and says..you are playing video game right..so what if this is
ludhiana..even we have everything..Tv, internet, laptop, dvd, cd (total
sales girl! like all she needs is a register and a basta full of stuff
to sell! I think she should say..alloo lelo, kela lelo..baingan
lelo..tht would suit her better!! http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley7.gifhttp://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley7.gifhttp://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley7.gif)

Preet says wow! then Ash shows him her laptop and says i dloaded some
games yest night, but i am not able to open it..preet offers to
help...she says..I feel we have met somewhere before..Preet is enjoying
her dumbness and says really? looking at her laptop..she says may be as
kids we played together, hide n seek n stuff? (Hahahahah Preet ?? and hide n seeek?? LOL!!)
preet shrugs off n says, nope i dont remember..then she says, may be i
met you online, you know through one of those website and goes on to
ask him which website he is on..and says she is on Facebook, Hot..and
preet puts in mail..and she says yeah yeah I am in hotmail too..thy
hi5..Ash says how many hours we chatted..preet is clueles...and she
says her id..and preet is totally confused..Ash suggests tht even
though this is ludhiana..there is night clubs and many party
clubs...preet is all excited and says wow awesome, we will defintiely
go..Prem walks in...listens...Ash stands up to leave n bumps into Prem
and asks who he is...he says I am your lalit uncles another son,
Prem..she offers him the night club party deal, he declines and says he
prefers having dinner with friends..Ash leaves Preet suggests tht this
place has one cool person and says I have made up my mind..now you
should make her my Ash babhi..Prem looks disinterested...


Lalit, Balwant, Gayatri and Dj are downstairs
and they discuss the kids marriage...Lalit says we should get the kids
married ASAP (itni bhi kya jaldi hai! bhuddhe thodi na ho rahe
hain!)balwant looks back at Dj, who smirks...he fiegns to feel bad tht
marriage immediately after veerji's detah wont be a good idea..as ppl
will talk..Lalit says he isnt worried about ppl, he cares about his
friends last words...Dj smirks again..Lalit then turns to Dj and says,
we wil have the marriage in tht house, as i built it for Veerji and I
dont want to leave those two girls you bought in yest here alone in
this big house..since one of the girl is heer, I want you to bring her
to tht house as well, just bcoz i had named Veer's daughter heer as
well..Dj looks shocked and uncomfortable..both balwant n Dj look at
each other skeptical...


Prem and preet are together and preet says to
prem tht i heard you said yes to marriage...pls dont come under
pressured and says yes..its your life....prem says i am very happy with
dad's decision..Ash comes in and calls preet abhi and says you are
coming for tonights party right? he says yes...now tht we are alll
gonna become relatives...Ash shys and goes..right then Lalit walks in
preet aks prem if he is coming or not..lalit says no one is going
anywhere..preet says here comes the yamraj! lalit tells him to shut up
and reminds him tht he needs to go to ambala for a project and also
tells him to visit the shiv mandir on his way for his bro's sake..preet
grunts and grumbles..lalit hands over the file and leaves...


Lalit is downstairs..a hawaldar comes and asks
him if this is the house of the two girls, lalit is take
aback..hawaldar says her name is heer and their bag got left out in the
trian, a lady inspector found it and thus i brought it here.. lalit
tells him to give the bag and says he will give it..he does not look
well at the address..as he is walk into the house..a food packet of
mathi drops out of the bag he bends doan and looks at it and remembers
the delicios mathi Teji would make for him..he has a flashback...lalit
is in tears....he puts the food int he bag, stands up and walks in..he
opens the door of the room of heer and meher...they both are
shocked.... heer and meeher say namaste to him...he comes with the
bad..they both are tearful and scared....lalit asks them their
name...Heer says..my name is heer, lalit gets hyper and asks her last
name, her father and mothers name and which village she is from..heer
gets a lil scared..and lies tht her father name is bhushan sign bedi
and her mothers name is krishna bedi..meher is shocked and
confused...they both hold hands and heer gestures her..lalit is
disappointed and leaves...Meher questions Heer as to why she
lied...heer then tells her in flashback of what Dj had told her about
lalit..Dj had lied tht lalit hated Balraj and how lalit loved money and
was jealous of veerji and how he was not good friends and how he came
exactly after his death and how much he hates him...Dj convinces heer
tht he never wanted prem n heer to get married..and after so many years
he comes to get his son married..to whom, my daughter..she cries like
she is not happy and says i have no choice..one side i have the
marriage, and the other side we have become indebted to them...you dont
tell anyone you are veerji's daughter...and heer agreess..meher says
she wont tell anyone..heer prepares to go somewhere...meher asks where
she is going..heer says she is going to the shiv mandir in ambala where
their father had tied the sacred thread for his friendship and her
marriage..she says now tht thread cannot be there anymore, I will go
remove it...


Lalit is having balraj's picture removed fromt
he house and the whole place is getting cleaned up...he wonders where
peet is n why he hasnt reached yet...he calls preet...preet is in a car
with ash n other girls...he tells the girls to keep quite and he talks
to lalit..lalit gets angry...prem comes and says let me talk to
him...preet acts tht he has gotten lost somewhere, when prem asks for a
landmark..he tells him tht he is probably near a shiv temple..prem
hears this and tells lalit he is gonna go meet prem and get him
back..lalit says, the one guy who makes everyone lost is lost? I dont
believe it..you dont have to go he will come....prem insists and thus
leaves...


he comes to the shiv mandir..their heer is
hugging the shiv ling and crying her lungs out...a wierd looking women
gets up from her sleep and says today two ppl are gonna meet and this
meet the whole world will remember for ever..prem comes into the temple
and sees heer crying..but does not see her face....
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:45 pm

9th APRIL 08 (Wednesday)

prem walks towards the mandir and heer is
crying..he climbs the stairs and sees heer crying out loud from a
distance..heer stops crying and gets up prem is still wathcing
her..heer says tht since childhood she has seen the god he knows
everything about her life but today the truth of her life is tears
which you have given me..prem is watching her..see asks as to why he
has given so many tears to her and why did he take away her parents
from her..she is shattered neither can she cry in front of her sister
nor can she cry alone..m the only one she has otherwise whereelse would
she go..cant even look up and cry for her parents would b hurt..wht
should i do since you have made me cry you should answer me..why r u
doing this to me..you have changed my entire life..wht do u want..prem
is looking at her with curiosity..she recalls tht her mom said tht whn
the sky will b full of light tht night her life partner will come to
her..she also said tht god make jodi's from first..she complains tht
she is going to get married to a person whom she doesnt know..

prem walks towards where she is
standing..whereas heer is saying tht whn two people meet..love doesnt
bond them but in this world most important relationship is of pain..the
pain which whn one experience the other can feel..which brings two
people close in worse times..prem is walking towards her..today my
heart is filled with pain..and without youi have noone to share my pain
with..you only say wht should i do..prem is standing behind her...shez
very lonley nothing is in her hands..

Prem is walking towards her..tht mad lady is
singing..prem comes right behind her and heer can feel his
presence...she covers her face with her duppatta and prem's face gets
covered with her duppatta....

other lady ask jugni as to wht happened to her
all of a sudden..she says today some one is going to meet and the world
will remember for ages..as prem's face is covered with her duppata heer
runs and prem runs behind her.. hes unable to catch her but gets her
payal..

heer is hiding..she sees prem and runs and prem
runs behind her..heer jumps on to the bus and prem is looses sight of
her..he looks at her payal....

Daljeet is shown doing prep and saying to
herself tht today shez got only a house on veerji's name tomorrow it
will b on her name..Prems mom is shown ligthing the diya in the home
mandir and everyone is praying..they do the aarti one by one..prems mom
asks lallit as why is he worried he says tht since whn he is trying to
call prem but hez phone is switched off and duno where is he he should
atleast have been in the pooja..she says he shldnt worry abt him he is
prem and not preet he wont b lost..he will come and since today theres
pooja in the house he shld calm down..Preet offers to go and look for
prem so lallit says if you go thn i'll have to look for you..he tells
preet to relax prem will come..

Prem in the car is still thinking abt heer..he
couldnt look at her face..saw only eyes..there was so much pain inthose
eyes...he thinks who was the girl who touched his heart in one
moment..knowing tht he is going to get married to some one else how did
some else come into his heart..he has to talk to bauji before
engagement..if theres doubt in his mind thn hes doing wrong by marrying
tht girl..

Preet sees Ashlesha and asks her who r the cute
girls wid her..she says they r her frnds ..he ask her to introduce
him..she does annoyingly and preet starts flirting wid those girls
saying tht he is preet ash thinks why is lieing tht he is preet..just
then prem reaches house and preet asks him as to why is he late..prem
says tht nothig the broke down so he was late..preet says tht everyone
is waiting for him..

Meher is worried abt heer as to where is she
just thn heer enters..heer says tht she couldnt come early as she
couldnt get ne transportation..thn she asks meher as to wht is she
doing with the luggage outside..meher informs her tht chachi is
shifting in a new house..she wants both of them to stay wid
her..everyones gone and they have to go there as well..they will b
staying in the outhouse according to daljeet..she has given 25 rupees
for the transportation..

Meher crys and says Ash is getting engaged to
Prem.heer is shocked to hear tht..Prem's mom is looking for prem and
she asks ash abt him she says tht he is here since a long time and our
habits also match ..we both like to talk ...prem's mom is
surprised..ash points out to preet as prem but since prem is right
behind him his mom thinks she pointed out to prem..

She(prem's mom) goes to prem and prem ask as to
wht all these people r doing she says tht here all this happens whether
happiness is big or small..all relatives come..she does his aarti..

Prem goes to meet lallit who is talking wid his
frnds..he says he just arrived..prem says he has to say something to
him and he cannt say amidst such people..lallit says he has a big
surprise instore for him..he goes and makes announcement of the
engagement of prem-ashleahs..THE END!!!
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:45 pm

10th APRIL 08 (Thursday)

The epi starts with everyone clapping on the
engagement announcement...Lalit calls Prem..and he stands besides
Preet..Ashs blushes...Prem goes ahead..Ash is confused..Lalit
introduces Prem to everyone..Ash almost has a faint down realising who
Prem actually is...Dj sees her faint n manages her saying she is
dieting thus shee fainted..she drags Ash away! There Lalit praises Prem
from being a great son he is, in todays world where a brother is not
his own..and balwant looks guilty..An old man comes and praises him and
Prem...Lalit asks prem what he was gonna say...he says tht he is happy
with what ever he has decided..Lalit blesses him and leaves..prem looks
on sadly to gayatri , who seemed to see the pain in his eyes..

Heer and Meher land up at the house..Dj sees them
and rushes to them..trying to control her disappointment that they came
before the engagement got over...but she feigns sorrow tht she doesnt
have ppl to work, and she feels ashamed as those ppl will think they
are small(Which you are! mentally you r a pea brain!!! hens think
better than you! huh!) she goes on to tell them that she also needs to
show them that they can afford caterers and all so meher n heer agree
to help Dj (another set of Dumbos!) Dj tries to feign sadness tht she
is trying to make her neices work..Heer says its their pride to help
their sisters....Dj blesses them and says i wish you were my
daughters..a guy comes and Dj tells the girls to go with him and tell
them the work..and tells Heer to make sure they add less salt to the
drinks...they leave...DJ thinks, to herself..I told you add less salt
else ppl become namakharam...it is better to feed them less so that
they will never become namakharams! There Heer and Meher go into the
kitchen and the guy curses that there is a limit to being a miser and
here they paid less so tht they get lesser ppl to work! heer and meher
are sad and tearful..the guy tells them he will get them their catering
uniforms...


Ash is in the room..Dj comes to her and curses
her tht she wanted to marry tht bandar preet who keeps roaming here n
there? She curses her more and praises Prem...and tells Ash tht if she
was in her place she would only marry the rajkumar Prem...and she likes
her...Prem also takes care of all the business...and is good..Ash says
but he is cold..he does not like the things i like...Dj says thts good
as tht will save her money and if tht saves him money, then she can use
those money...she goes on to say, why do you think i married your
father...the fatso with not even good looks..only for money..Ash is
shell shocked (Idiot!! she is insulting your father, her husband and
you are looking on??Characters like Dj are an insult to women!) She
tells Ash, tht she is getting two in one, good looking as well as rich
and tht she should go ahead and only marry Prem...Ash reluctantly
agrees...


Prem is standing sad and thinking of lalits
announcement..Gy comes to him and asks why he is sad...he says
nothing..Gy says why did you say yes for the marriage..Prem says bcoz i
wanted to..Gy asks then why are you sad? Prem keeps quite..Gy says kids
can hide many things but a mothers eye can always see the pain..and
asks him wht is the issue..Prem tells her tht he saw someone in the
shiv mandir...Gy asks whom? Prem says she was a girl..Gy asks her
name...prem says I dont know her name or anything..but seeing her i
felt tht i was related to her for as long as i have lived...like her
pain was mine....i dont know why sometimes strangers become like our
own...I dont know why i am so attracted to her....Gy asks if she should
talk to lalit prem says no..he just wants to see lalit happy..and he
leaves..Gy is sad...


Meher is serving ppl food..and a man replaces his
plate onto her tray..she asks him why he kept it back..the guy says
bcoz his wife does not want him to eat fried stuff..and he says he
hasnt even touched it..so she can give it to some one..Meher looks on
sadly..she then keeps her tray, takes tht plate and goes inside...in
the kitchen..she looks at the plate and starts putting the food into
her pocket..as she is about to put the second piece..Dj catches her
hand...Dj asks very angrily wht she is doing? if she had to do such low
stuff she could have told her, there were so many ppl who ate half
plate..she could have given her from tht...meher is tearful...Dj scolds
meher more and takes the food out of her pocket...Heer comes in and
tells Dj to foegive her...Dj suddenly changes her tone and says I never
told her not to eat..but she shouldnt have gone down to stealing...Heer
asks for forgiveness again...Dj tells ok but be sure to take the
remaining food out of her pocket and serve other food..she leaves..Heer
asks meher why she did this..Meher says she didnt steal, she wasonly
getting the food for heer,s icne she hadnt eaten as well...they both
have a sweet moment and Meher cries....


There in the hall...Llait announces again..and
introduces his sons to the guests and tells about his friendship with
Balraj...they all dance and sing to the song chapa chapa charka
chale...Prem sings and thinks of Heer...as Heer serves ppl
drinks...after the song..prem n Ash sit to change rings....Prem has the
ring in his hand..ash does not have it..she asks Ash where is her
ring..Ash says she gave it to Preet in the morning,t hinking he was
Prem....Dj is tensed..Gy asks if anything is wrong...Dj says i dont get
tensed tht easily, i give tension...she goes in and then curses as to
why she cant find the girls when she needs..right then Heer comes..and
she notices the ring in her hand..Dj rushes to her and tells her she
needs her ring ..heer says its her moms as she gifted it to her on
diwali..Dj says she will get her two more like tht but right now she
needs hers and Dj snatches it from her and rushes back..heer is
tearful..


In the hall Dj is back with the ring and slips it
into Ash's hand..., Dj says in our custom, if the girls ring of the
middle finger fits the guys small finger then they r a couple made in
heaven...Balwant cracks a horrible joke at that as to how he n Dj are
made in heaven...Anyways...Prem puts the ring o Ash...Dj then asks Ash
to put hers on Prem...Preet says Ash babhi now is the real test to see
how well you guys are for each other...as Ash puts the ring onto Prems
finger..Heer comes there tearful...

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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:46 pm

14th APRIL 08 (Monday)

Prem put the ring in Ahsleshas finger and
Ashlesha in Prems finger Heer watch this and is very sad. She looks at
Prem and think about the words of her mother and crys. Mean while
Daljeet is taking pictures with prem and Ashlesha.

Balwant introduces Khanna sir he is a lawyer.
They go and sit Lalit says that he want to get a hotel Khanna sir ask
kis ki naam par Lalit say 3 beto ke naam par and Lonavle mein mera
betiyaan bi hese dar hoge Balwant is looking very sneaky. 1 daughter is
married adn Veera is studying and they are coming soon to India. Khanna
sir say oke if i get some propsal i will show at to you

Balwant ask Lalitji will you give you other
children so much as prem Lalit says yes why. Balwant say i asked just
because Prem apka sara busniss samalta hai adn bohat mehnat ki hai so
isliye use zyaada milna chahieye i am saying this because Prem will be
proud and the other children will get a prena. Lalit says if the other
children get zimedaar then they will help prem Balwant ha yeh bhi thiek
hai mein to isa hi kehtata. Lalit looks confused

Preet says to Prem ab aap poori zindagi ke
liye set ho chokeho you aer now engaged and poori dunya ke nazar mujpe
hogie you know i am the most coolest guy in the world an Preet talks
about the ring that suits Prem in his finger at that time Ashlesha
comes and says hai Prem she goes and stand by prems side and say hi
preet. Preet takes the real engagment ring and say bro i think you
should try this one Ashlesha looks worried. Preet says because this is
Ash babis ring wo missing thi Ashlesha goes away from there. Preet say
elo but Prem say no preet the one who is maked for me is with me and it
fit in my finger and looks at it.

Meher is hungry and is looking at the food.
Daljeet comes ans ask are you hungry then eat something Meher says but
yeh sab jhoota hai she say this ladoo adn some more arenth jhoota eat
it and then Lalit comes are you hungry come oitside the food is outside

Lalit gives food to Meher and she eats it
Lalit watch her and remembers Meher when she was young and eating adn
then she gets sachi adn he gives her water in the party Meher get
sachki and giver her water and says maybe someone is remembering you.
Daljeet comes and Meher ask can i get some food for my sister and he
say yes.

Prem is standing alone adn Daljeet say he is
standing here alone and Ash is standing there with her friends she goes
to Ash and says come go to Prem eat in one plate. She takes something
from Prem plate and says kitna oily hai Prem says it is oke you carry on

Gayatri tells lalit that she thinks that prem
is not happy with this realationship there is something garbar. Lalit
says what are you saying if he wasnt happy then why he saied yes now
they are engaged maybe he is nervous.

Prem have food in his hand but dont eat he gives it to a servant.
Meher comes to Heer and says i have brought
food for you. She ask who did give you please eat it. She refuse to eat
the food. Meher says please eat she says i will eat the servant brings
the plate that prem give to him and Heer eats the food on the plate.
She say i will eat this food but not teh food that the person gaev who
hates my father.

Heer tells Meher about the ring and says that was agheri nishani form mom and i will get him back. She
goes to Prems room she sees him looking at the ring he take it off is
finger and goes to the bathroom i think. Heer goes inside she takes the
ring she just want to leave but the a vase break and Prem comes to
back. Heer want to run away but Prem holds her hand she hide her face
with her hand. He asks who are u what are you doing this time in my
room he light a lighter and takee her hand off of her face adn he sees
her and remembers the eyes of Heer at the mandir. They look at each
other and it ends.
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Post by Fatema Abidi on Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:47 pm

15th APRIL 08 (Tuesday)

The epi starts with Heer getting caught by Prem..Prem lights a
lighter infront of heers face..heer is covering her face with her
hand..prem moves her hand away slowly...Heer turns and Prem keeps
looking at her, remembering all the times he had seen those eyes...Heer
and Prem are eye locked and heer slowly slides the ring on prem's
little finger (woot woot) Preet calls for Prem as BB (Big brother) and
Heer runs away..Prem goes behind her...Preet is like, age ladki peeche
bhai..and runs behind her...heer runs down the stairs with her mile
long dupatta...prem follows..Dj tries to stop Prem..but he is nowhere
near stopping..Dj thinks why is Prem running away like a rajdhani
express Heer and prem run outside..and heer sees a waiting car, sits in
and the car takes off..its the catering walas car...prem notes down
then number of the car..and then looks at his finger and remembers the
moment when Heer slid the ring into his fingers and thinks..she came
and then she went..her going has made me realise tht my life is bonding
into a relationship with someone else...i should think about her
now..there heer tells the car driver to stop and gets out returning the
apron...Prem thinks..who is that girl..why did she want my engagement
ring..why do i keep bumping into her so many times..Heer thinks I
wanted to bring back my ring..but what would he think about me that i
was stealing it from him..why does he come infront of me so much..Prem
thinks..why do i feel her pain in her eyes..why do i see her
everywhere..in the shiv mandir n other places..she is a standger and
yet her pain is like my own..why is it so painful..Heer is walking..and
bumps into Manmeet's mother..she blasts Heer left right n center for
heer being alone in the road at so late in the night as the society has
gone bad and tells her tht she needs to talk to Dj about it...

Dj and Aspreet meet and Aspreet says i dont want this relationship with
my son..Dj is trying to act sad..Asp says i dont want such unmarried
girls for my house who have no culture and roam around at night..DJ
pleads her not to break the relation..Asp is adamant..and says her mom
dad never did anything about the dowry we had asked for..and on top of
tht her beauty...Dj says..as for giving n taking..the and is still
heer's..once she gets married we will change the name of the land on
Manmeets name..heer feels hasseled..DJ very cleverly tells Asp tht the
land will eventually become theres...Dj pleads and fakes to Asp...Asp
leaves...Dj comes to Heer..Heer says what did you do...why did you
promise the land..Dj says here i am trying to save your relation and
you are worrying about your land..Heer says baba never wanted to sell
tht land, it was so dear to him..Dj says if i could I wouldnt have
asked for it..but we are not so rich to pay for the marriage of 4
daughters..tht land has to be given away....Heer is tearful...Dj
convinces Heer to give up the land..and goes away....

Lalit is smoking cigar..Preet sees and rats him out to Gayatri and
tells her there is smoke in the house..Gy goes out to the hall and
smells cigar smoke and meanwhile..Prem walks in on lalit..lalit chokes
on the smoke..and prem is shocked..They both see Gy coming..feeling
scared..Lalit puts the cigar in Prems hands and Gy comes and is shocked
to see the cigar in Prems hand..Lalit catches the cue and says arent
you ashamed of smoking before your dad..Preet is confused..Gy says prem
was smoking? lalit goes on to try to scold Prem a lil more..Gy
says..arent you ashamed of yourself lalitji, you are making me a fool?
My son does not even know to hold a cigar and you are making him the
culprit? Prem all the while holding the cigar in a rather wierd manner
looks like a lost puppy! Lalit takes the cigar from prems hand and says
you dont know how to hold a cigar..and show him to do it and only then
realises his mistake..Gy says you smoke cigar and you are putting the
blame on my son! Preet ceases the opportunity and says, Yeah mom I told
he was the one..he was smoking..lalit says Preet you are not my
son..Preet says yeah I agree.."Kahain yeh ujda chaman aur kahan mein
Sarsoin ka khet" meaning where his dads balding head and where is his
full hair head..lalit curses preet that he cannot be his son atall he
got changed in the hospital..preet says yeah dad you are right it must
have been a bald baby in the hospital..and lalit chases Preet and Gy
comes to prem, holds her ear and says Do not even dare hold a cigar
again..prem looks at her and smiles...

Heer is crying...Meher comes to her and is upset tht they just lost the
land..heer tells her not to worry as she will not give up the land in
any case...thts dad's last nishani and I will not give tht up
atall..meher asks what will she do..heer says she will find a job and
work and get money to save the land..Lalit happens to pass them with
newspaper in his hand and overhears their conversation..he looks at the
classified column n feels sad...Next day morning..Heer is up and trying
to wake Meher up..she keeps going back to sleep...Heer gets frustrated
with Meher and tells her to keep smiling and opens the door to find the
newspaper on the door step...she picks it up and goes in...n wakes
meher up and asks her to look at some job openings...Heer says God has
shown me the path..he will get me the job too...

Asp walks in and says I did exactly wht you asked me too...from now on
its your responsibility..Dj walks out in the dark room n says you dont
worry about it..your work is done right..thts good..i had to do this
with them..else all the roads to get the land would have gone..after
the marriage is over, the land is mine and heer is yours..Asp says as
much as you need the land, i need heer more..Dj says we need to keep
the girls threatening from time to time..only then will they give up
the land...just keep watching how with love i will get that land away
from them...I need tht land at any cost..you just keep watching how i
do it Aspreet...and the epi ends on Dj's scheming face...
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